I love Rie with lovely flowers in her head..

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Aug 25, 2011 04:24
I talked with Rie about our job, but it was a short time.
I always think that I want to talk with her for a long time.
I feel happy while I am talking with her.
If I am single, I want to marry with her.
But I have a family, my wife, daughter, son and myself.

I want to talk to Rie, but I can talk to her a little bit.
I talk to her for a little chance.
I love her with a little cosmetics and I also love just the way she is.

That my dream will not come true.
But I love Rie with lovely flowers in her head.
Prince Niku　肉王子様
Aug 25, 2011 04:38
  • I talked with Rie about our job, but it was a short time.

  • I talked with Rie about our job, but it was just for a short time.

 
  • I always think that I want to talk with her for a long time.

  • I always think about talking with her for a long time

 
  • I feel happy while I am talking with her.

  • I feel happy when I talk with her.

 
  • If I am single, I want to marry with her.

  • If I was single, I would want to marry her./I'd want to get married with her

 
  • I want to talk to Rie, but I can talk to her a little bit.

  • I want to talk to Rie, but I can only talk to her a little bit.

 
  • I talk to her for a little chance.

  • I talk to her for a slight chance.

 
  • I love her with a little cosmetics and I also love just the way she is.

  • I love her with a little makeup and I also love her just the way she is.

 
  • That my dream will not come true.

  • This/My dream will not come true.

 

It's hard to correct a poem because it's your choice of words and even grammar, but I tried to make it sound more natural

Aug 25, 2011 07:57 Sen
Thank you very much for everything!

Aug 25, 2011 10:54 Prince Niku　肉王子様
The title is really good! "I love Rie with lovely flowers in her head.."

Aug 25, 2011 23:08 Sen
Thanks!
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