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Dec 31st 2010 13:46
It is so cold day to snow in Kyoto.

I had grown up in Kagoshima which is second most southern part of Japan.
So it is rare case to see snow piling up for me.

I was really moved by sounds like pigeon's song when I step on the snow.
And I also moved by children yelping with delight.

To making a snowman, I will enjoy the snowy day like them.
kisayista
Thank you for your correction!
Dec 31st 2010 14:10
  • It is so cold day to snow in Kyoto.

  • It is so such a cold day that it's to snowing in Kyoto.

 
  • I had grown up in Kagoshima which is second most southern part of Japan.

  • I had grown grew up in Kagoshima, which is the second most southern part of Japan, so it is a rare case for me to see snow piling up.

 
  • So it is rare case to see snow piling up for me.

  • So it is rare case to see snow piling up for me.

 
  • I was really moved by sounds like pigeon's song when I step on the snow.

  • When I stepped outside on the snow, I was really moved by the sound of the pigeon's song and by the children yelping with delight.

 
  • And I also moved by children yelping with delight.

  • And I also moved by children yelping with delight.

 
  • To making a snowman, I will enjoy the snowy day like them.

  • To making In building a snowman, I will hope to enjoy the snowy day like them.

 
Nice entry! Hope you're enjoying this day! Happy New Year!
Dec 31st 2010 14:42 shin-chan
Nice Corrections!
I Hope to be Happy New Year for you!
SJ
Dec 31st 2010 15:08
Did you make a snowman? Snow is really pretty ^_^ but it is also cold and slippery, and wet, haha. I like playing in the snow though. Happy New Year!
Dec 31st 2010 16:09 shin-chan
Thank you for your comment!
I had made a half-snow- and half-mad- man last time, but I made a complete snowman this time!
Though I can't count out how many slips I did, I'm enjoying today!
Happy New Year!　
kickstartlife
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 02nd 2011 15:14
  • I had grown up in Kagoshima which is second most southern part of Japan.

  • I had grown grew up in Kagoshima, which is the second most southern part of Japan, so it's really rare to see it snow like this / so much.

 
Jan 03rd 2011 14:12 shin-chan
Good Corrections! Thank you!
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