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May 17th 2011 15:59
Japanese government order whole nations to save electricity.I' m trying to do so, put the unused plugｓ off, stop to listen to music and so on. I will make some green curtains which block the sun light by vine plants.I already planted some "goya"s,bitter gourds.I hope that I can see beautiful green curtains in my garden.
Tummai
Thank you for correction!
May 17th 2011 15:46
  • Japanese government order whole nations to save electricity.

  • The Japanese government ordered the whole nations to save electricity.

 
  • I' m trying to do so, put the unused plugｓ off, stop to listen to music and so on.

  • I' m trying to do what I can, unplugging unused appliances, not listening to music, etc ("etc" is much more natural to say than "and so on".)

 
  • I will make some green curtains which block the sun light by vine plants.

  • I will make some green curtains to block the sun light using vines.

 
May 17th 2011 18:51 maru's mommy
Tank you, Tummai.I noticed that I tend to use a relative pronoun instead of an infinitive.
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