Sudden tornado

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May 10, 2012 23:01
A tornado occurred in Kanto area on May 6 and destroyed everything on the way.
Unfortunately a young girl was killed by it.
Some people got damaged their houses, even though they had just repaired them which was destroyed by the last huge earthquake.
I'm really sorry for them.

Human beings are powerless against nature.

pix3ls
Thank you for your correction!
May 11, 2012 07:00
  • A tornado occurred in Kanto area on May 6 and destroyed everything on the way.

  • A tornado occurred in the Kanto area on May 6 and destroyed everything in its path.

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  • Some people got damaged their houses, even though they had just repaired them which was destroyed by the last huge earthquake.

  • Some people got their houses damaged, even though they had just repaired them from the destruction caused by the last huge earthquake.

 

May 11, 2012 14:12 maru's mommy
pix3ls, thank you very much for your corrections.
Jonathan
Thank you for your correction!
May 11, 2012 07:40
  • Some people got damaged their houses, even though they had just repaired them which was destroyed by the last huge earthquake.

  • Some people's houses were damaged, even though they had just repaired them from the destruction caused by the last huge earthquake.

 

It's such a tragedy. I hope the people can recover quickly and safely.

May 11, 2012 14:13 maru's mommy
Jonathan, thanks for your corrections and comments.
I hope so too.
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