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Here again. This is from text book... I'm really sorry, but please correct my entry...
[The topic]
Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
[My answer]
Nowadays, some sports professionals can earn too large amount of money unnecessarily I think. Even though the sports professionals are still teenager, the rewards for their games are too much beyond the amount that normal people can earn through their entire lives. But I agree that these people can get such amount of money if the amount were halved.
First, why do these kind of people can earn such amounts of money? I think the amounts of rewards would distort their purpose of playing sports. I know one pro golf player whose father resigned his job for managing a office for his son. It’s obvious that his father can earn much money than working as normal business man. In his father’s case, I can’t help myself think he resigned his job not for his son but for money. The games that competitive sports professional play are very good advertisement for the companies that financially supports the tournaments. That’s the reason why they can earn too much money, but it’s means many people watch these games. Actually, I don’t have any other idea for entertaining people more than watching sports. The lose of a national team sometimes trigger a big deal of mob and depression over the country. Nowadays, sports can take place of national identity and the results of games affect the citizen’s mind.
In conclusion, I agree that the professional sports players can earn large amount of money, but still I think the amount they can get is too much and it’s possible to distort their purpose for playing sports. These pro sports players should always remember lots of their fans enjoy their games and so these sports player can get such amount of money.
After finishing to write this, I realized I didn't discussed both view.....
[The topic]
Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
[My answer]
Nowadays, some sports professionals can earn too large amount of money unnecessarily I think. Even though the sports professionals are still teenager, the rewards for their games are too much beyond the amount that normal people can earn through their entire lives. But I agree that these people can get such amount of money if the amount were halved.
First, why do these kind of people can earn such amounts of money? I think the amounts of rewards would distort their purpose of playing sports. I know one pro golf player whose father resigned his job for managing a office for his son. It’s obvious that his father can earn much money than working as normal business man. In his father’s case, I can’t help myself think he resigned his job not for his son but for money. The games that competitive sports professional play are very good advertisement for the companies that financially supports the tournaments. That’s the reason why they can earn too much money, but it’s means many people watch these games. Actually, I don’t have any other idea for entertaining people more than watching sports. The lose of a national team sometimes trigger a big deal of mob and depression over the country. Nowadays, sports can take place of national identity and the results of games affect the citizen’s mind.
In conclusion, I agree that the professional sports players can earn large amount of money, but still I think the amount they can get is too much and it’s possible to distort their purpose for playing sports. These pro sports players should always remember lots of their fans enjoy their games and so these sports player can get such amount of money.
After finishing to write this, I realized I didn't discussed both view.....
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This is from the text book...
Nowadays, some sports professionals can earn what I think is an unnecessarily large amount of money unnecessarily I think.
Even though some sports professionals may still be teenagers, the monetary rewards for their work are too much go beyond the amount that other people may earn through their entire lives.
Even if the amount of some sports professional's earnings were to be halved they would still be earning a large amount of money.
First, why is it that people in this kind of profession can earn such large amount of money?
I think the amount of the monetary reward would distort their purpose/reason for playing sports.
I know of one pro golf player whose Father resigned from his job for managing a office in order to work with his son.
It’s appears obvious that this man could earn much more money working with his son than he would working as a normal business man.
In this case, I can’t help but myself think he may have resigned from his job not necessarily to work with his son but for money.
The games that competitive sports professional play provide very good advertisement opportunities for the companies that financially support the tournaments.
This is part of the reason why they can earn so much money, but such investment from companies also means that many people get to watch these games.
Further, I believe there are few things that are more entertaining for people than watching sports.
The loss of a national team can sometimes trigger a great deal of depression in people of the country.
Nowadays, performance in sports can become a part of national identity and so the results of games can affect the citizens' mentality.
In conclusion, I agree that the professional sports players can earn large amounts of money, but still I think the amount they can get is too much and it’s possible that this may distort their purpose for playing sports.
Pro sports players should always remember that lots of their fans enjoy their games and this is something that allows these sports players to earn such large amounts of money.
After finishing writing this, I realized I didn't discussed both view.....
I hope I have helped a little! :)