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Lauren
  • The contents of the summary is like followings;
  • The contents of the summary is like should contain the following:

markbellis
  • There were thousands participants who were from young to old, men and women.
  • There were thousands of participants, from young to old, men and women.
  • just more idomatic

idiom

Apr 17th 2012 21:41 Public Down & Dirty

markbellis
  • It was a race to compete the time of running the course where there are many obstacles like a mud pit, river crossing, sharp slope and so on.
  • It was a race to run a course where there are many obstacles like a mud pit, a river crossing, a steep slope and so on.

sentence

Apr 17th 2012 21:40 Public Down & Dirty


  • We believe that the game is not only one time and the win is not the only purpose for the game.”
  • We believe that The game is not only one time and the winning is not the only purpose for of the game.”
  • or "The game is not only one hand and winning is not the only purpose of the game." or "The game is not decided by only one hand and winning is not the only purpose of the game." or you could combine the last two sentences, "However, we can’t give up as the game is not decided by only one hand and winning is not the only purpose of the game."

sentence

Apr 16th 2012 18:45 Public Life Is Like a Card Game


  • It’s unreasonable that the situation of the job openings for graduates is different from year to year by economy like the turn of the game.
  • It’s unreasonable that the situation of the job openings employment opportunities for new graduates is different from year to year by depending on the economy just like the turn of the a game of chance.

sentence

Apr 16th 2012 18:42 Public Life Is Like a Card Game


  • "We have to play the card game of our life with the distributed cards.
  • "We have to play the card game of our life with the distributed cards we were dealt.

verb

Apr 16th 2012 18:39 Public Life Is Like a Card Game


  • The essay in a Japanese newspaper was impressive for me.
  • The An essay in a Japanese newspaper was impressedive for me.
  • Or, "An essay in a Japanese newspaper made a deep impression on me."

sentence

Apr 16th 2012 18:39 Public Life Is Like a Card Game

Mike
  • He reminded me of old myself.
  • He reminded me of old myself. My old self

idiom

Apr 15th 2012 18:45 Public Old Myself

Mike
  • I worked in our Paris branch in this program in 2000.
  • I worked in our Paris branch under this program in 2000.

prepostion

Apr 15th 2012 18:44 Public Old Myself

Tim
  • The accumulated red deficit is about one thousand billion dollar.
  • The accumulated red deficit is about one trillion dollars.

word

Apr 13th 2012 18:59 Public Sony

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