Lauren
- English
- The contents of the summary is like followings;
- The contents of the summary is like should contain the following:
markbellis
- English
- There were thousands participants who were from young to old, men and women.
- There were thousands of participants, from young to old, men and women.
- just more idomatic
markbellis
- English
- It was a race to compete the time of running the course where there are many obstacles like a mud pit, river crossing, sharp slope and so on.
- It was a race to run a course where there are many obstacles like a mud pit, a river crossing, a steep slope and so on.
- We believe that the game is not only one time and the win is not the only purpose for the game.”
- We believe that The game is not only one time and the winning is not the only purpose for of the game.”
- or "The game is not only one hand and winning is not the only purpose of the game." or "The game is not decided by only one hand and winning is not the only purpose of the game." or you could combine the last two sentences, "However, we can’t give up as the game is not decided by only one hand and winning is not the only purpose of the game."
- It’s unreasonable that the situation of the job openings for graduates is different from year to year by economy like the turn of the game.
- It’s unreasonable that the situation of the job openings employment opportunities for new graduates is different from year to year by depending on the economy just like the turn of the a game of chance.
Mike
- English
- I worked in our Paris branch in this program in 2000.
- I worked in our Paris branch under this program in 2000.
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Akira
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- Native language
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217290
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Location
U.S.A
Nation and region
U.S.A
Age
44
Birthday
8/6
Sex
Male
Occupation
office worker
