- Yesterday, I went to San Diego at night suddenly in order to handle a customer problem regardless of Saturday holiday.
- Yesterday, I went to San Diego at last night suddenly in order to handle a customer problem, regardless of Saturday holiday even though it was Saturday.
- Instead of "suddenly" it would be more natural to say "on short notice."
Sep 29, 2014 20:43 Unlucky Day
- Recently, there are some art galleries, shops and cafes, which are changing the atmosphere to attract general people including tourists.
- Recently, art galleries, shops and cafes are popping up everywhere, changing the atmosphere to attract even more tourists.
Sep 25, 2014 21:27 Graff Tour in LA
- The story consists of various elements, love, action, heart-warming, commedy and so on.
- The story consists of various elements: love, action, heart-warming, commedy and so on.
- When you list something, like for example the various elements in the story, you should use the:
Sep 25, 2014 21:16 No Ordinary Family