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squidlydeux
  • Whenever I went to Nagoya for my business or she came to Kansai, we met and talked a lot about many things from business to private.
  • Whenever I went to Nagoya for my on business or she came to Kansai, we met and talked a lot about many things from business to private personal.

Jul 7, 2013 21:10 Public Long Time No See
squidlydeux
  • Yesterday, I was happy to have received an email from my friend, whom I hadn’t contacted since I moved to the US.
  • Yesterday, I was happy to have received an email from my friend, whom I hadn't contacted haven't been in contact with since I moved moving to the US.
  • The original was okay. This sounds more natural.

Jul 7, 2013 21:09 Public Long Time No See
Lindsay
  • I was surprised that such a vulgar TV program was on air during daytime, although I didn’t understand the program well because of many slang.
  • I was surprised that such a vulgar TV program was on air during the daytime, although I didn’t understand the program well because of many all the slang.
  • "because of all the ~" is a common English phrase. It has a nuance of 〜のせいで

Jul 7, 2013 19:45 Public Jerry Springer Show
egmont
  • He was full of confident and behaved with dignity although there were some people who told that he was arrogant behind him.
  • He was full of confidence and behaved with dignity, although there were some people who said that he was arrogant behind his back.
  • "Told" is a transitive verb, it needs an object--told someone or told something. Example: "Later, he told his friend that the manager was arrogant," or "the workers told each other that he was arrogant."
Japanman
  • It was a good dumpling which I had never tasted.
  • It was a good dumpling which I had never tasted. This dumpling was something that I had never tasted before!
  • I was packed in the parking.
  • I was packed in the parking stuck inside.

Jun 29, 2013 20:59 Public Locked in Garage
karenlouise
  • My iPad version 1 was too old to be installed the app.
  • My iPad version 1 was is too old to have the app be installed the app on it.

Jun 28, 2013 20:24 Public Find iPhone
karlchen
  • The time when I get injured in a play with them like last night will not last long because of their growth.
  • As they get bigger, I won't get injured as often from playing with them, like I did last night.

Jun 14, 2013 21:22 Public Horsey Play
karlchen
  • I was happy to see them enjoy playing.
  • I was happy to see them having so much fun.
  • "Enjoy playing" isn't necessarily wrong grammatically, but it's not really how someone would say that idea.

Jun 14, 2013 21:21 Public Horsey Play
JohnRabbit
  • Most of the participants in the room didn’t notice this happening.
  • Most of the participants in the room didn’t notice this happening. did not notice what had happened.
  • Your tense is fine, but writing this in past tense sounds a little more natural.

Jun 12, 2013 19:40 Public Boy's Sorrow Filled Eyes

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