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Syberg
Sorry! Last sentence had a mistake, you should put "the" instead of "a": "I won`t need to go to THE Starbucks for my desk job on weekends anymore." Congratulations with the find! I fish that I could get to know a similar place near my h...

Dec 31, 2015 18:31 Public A Little Library
Adamnorman
  • My wife told me today that I was getting similar to my father including my voice.
  • My wife told me today that I was turning into my father, even my voice.

Dec 12, 2015 23:18 Public Aging
SPICE_UP_YOUR_LIFE
  • I’m searching for the meeting point.
  • I’m searching for a compromise. the meeting point. a

Nov 30, 2015 10:00 Public Job Description
SPICE_UP_YOUR_LIFE
  • It might be unbelievable in commonsense in the US that we have not had them until now.
  • It might be unbelievable in commonsense to think that in the US that we have not had them until now.
  • Use of "in commonsense" is not suitable.

Nov 30, 2015 09:59 Public Job Description
madox
  • Their large and heavy bagel at cheap price, one dollar for each ia simple and good taste.
  • Their large and heavy bagels are at cheap price, one dollar for each. They are simple and taste good.
  • これはふくざつな文です。This sentence had too much going on.

Nov 28, 2015 06:59 Public Pumpercnikel Bagel
madox
  • It’s a pleasure of every winter season to wear it, which is like meeting a friend after a while.
  • It’s a pleasure of every winter season to wear it, kind of like meeting an old friend after a long while.

Nov 28, 2015 06:47 Public My Favorite Waxed Coat
Slurmee
  • I wonder where he will be 15 years later, when I will have retired the company.
  • I wonder where he will be in 15 years later, at that stage when I will have retired from the company.

Nov 28, 2015 06:45 Public Trainee
MastyTango
  • Washing machine in my house was broken.
  • The washing machine in my house was broken.

Nov 27, 2015 17:46 Public Coin Laundry in the US
AlsEenPoffertje
  • I was so tired and in dismal mood.
  • I was so tired and in a dismal mood.
  • In English, you use the article "a" with moods. - I was in a bad mood. - I was in a really good mood today! - He seems to be in a decent mood.

Nov 27, 2015 17:40 Public Beautiful Sunset
AlsEenPoffertje
  • Today, I worked at the office for a whole day.
  • Today, I worked at the office all day/through the whole day.
  • Once more, I'm not entirely sure if "for a whole day" is necessarily wrong. However, I know for certain "all day" is much more natural when saying you did stuff through the whole day. While writing my explanation for the blue text I provided, I realized "through the whole day" is a way of writing it while still using the word "whole."

Nov 27, 2015 17:40 Public Beautiful Sunset

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