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Meatshield
  • The return flight was delayed by three hours because of heavy snow in Newark airport.
  • The return flight was delayed for three hours because of heavy snow near Newark Airport.

Feb 18, 2016 09:58 Public Flight Delay
FandeBach
  • We felt lower than the actual temperature because of strong wind.
  • We It felt colder than the actual temperature because of the strong wind.
  • The temperature is lower I feel colder

Feb 15, 2016 20:38 Public Niagara Falls
FandeBach
  • We arrived at the hotel at 3pm and tried to go to the falls closely.
  • We arrived at the hotel at 3pm and tried to go close to the falls closely.

Feb 15, 2016 20:38 Public Niagara Falls
madox
  • We felt lower than the actual temperature because of strong wind.
  • It felt colder than the actual temperature because of strong wind.
  • This is called "wind chill"

Feb 15, 2016 20:37 Public Niagara Falls
yoojin
  • I bought a bracelet as a remembrance of my staying in the US.
  • I bought a bracelet as a remembrance of my stay in the US.

Feb 14, 2016 20:31 Public Native Indian Jewelry
Tones
  • The jazz club had good atmosphere, which made me feel deep entertainment culture in NYC.
  • The jazz club had a good atmosphere, which made me feel deep the depth of the entertainment culture in NYC.

Feb 14, 2016 20:29 Public Birdland
Tones
  • Last Thursday, I went to a historical Jazz club in Manhattan called Birdland for the first time, because a singer at the night was a member of alumni association of my university in NYC.
  • Last Thursday, I went to an historical Jazz club in Manhattan called Birdland for the first time, because a singer at the that night was a member of the alumni association of my university in NYC.
  • Use "an" - rather than "a", for words starting with "h" or vowels.

Feb 14, 2016 20:28 Public Birdland
BerryParfait
  • I thought that the rich and heavy baked cream cheese was truly American taste.
  • I thought that the rich and heavy baked cream cheese tasted truly American.

Feb 10, 2016 17:22 Public New York Cheese Cake
Exis Night
  • The restaurant is famous for its New York Cheese Cake, which we had not tried it yet.
  • The restaurant is famous for its New York Cheese Cake, which we had not tried up until then.
  • Or: "...which we had not tried yet."

Feb 10, 2016 10:46 Public New York Cheese Cake
Gillian
  • Her enthusiastic talk, sometimes sing and dance, entertained me so much.
  • Her enthusiastic talk, sometimes sing and dance, entertained me so much.
  • It is correct, but it could sound a little smoother. Maybe like, "her talking was so enthusiastic, it was almost a sing and dance! She entertained me so much!"

Feb 7, 2016 20:50 Public Harlem Walking Tour

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