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Aaron6693
  • At the reception, my test appointment was declined, because my motorcycle was a rental one.
  • At the reception, my test appointment was declined, because my motorcycle was a rental one.
  • Or "At the reception desk..."

Oct 29, 2014 21:38 Public Unexpected Problems
cebee
  • A Way to Distress
  • A Way to De-stress

Oct 27, 2014 20:17 Public A Way to Distress
レイチェル
  • However, this business model might not work in Japan where kids’ population is decreasing rapidly.
  • However, this business model might not work in Japan where the kids’ population is decreasing rapidly.
neito_nate
  • Yesterday, I went to San Diego at night suddenly in order to handle a customer problem regardless of Saturday holiday.
  • Yesterday, I went to San Diego at last night suddenly in order to handle a customer problem, regardless of Saturday holiday even though it was Saturday.
  • Instead of "suddenly" it would be more natural to say "on short notice."

Sep 29, 2014 20:43 Public Unlucky Day
Nelson Tan
  • Recently, there are some art galleries, shops and cafes, which are changing the atmosphere to attract general people including tourists.
  • Recently, art galleries, shops and cafes are popping up everywhere, changing the atmosphere to attract even more tourists.

Sep 25, 2014 21:27 Public Graff Tour in LA
SíSePuede
  • I found the tour in Groupon at $12 dollars, which was 50% discount price.
  • I found the tour on Groupon for $12 dollars, which was a 50% discount price.

Sep 25, 2014 21:21 Public Graff Tour in LA
SíSePuede
  • The  story consists of various elements, love, action, heart-warming, commedy and so on.
  • The story consists of various elements: love, action, heart-warming, commedy and so on.
  • When you list something, like for example the various elements in the story, you should use the:

Sep 25, 2014 21:16 Public No Ordinary Family
nanaoj
  • I opened the bag on the way back to the office to taste it as soon as possible.
  • I opened the bag on the way back to the office to so I could taste it as soon as possible.
  • No mistake here, it's just more natural-sounding the way I wrote it.

Sep 21, 2014 22:07 Public Chili Spiced Mango
nanaoj
  • I love spice and I love dried mango so I thought it would be my ideal food.
  • I love spice and I love dried mango so I thought it would be my ideal food. I would love it. (or "...so I thought it would be perfect for me.")
  • There are no grammar mistakes here. "My ideal food" is just slightly the wrong idea here.

Sep 21, 2014 22:06 Public Chili Spiced Mango
nanaoj
  • I happened to find an attractive product.
  • I happened to find an attractive product. something that I thought looked good.
  • What you wrote isn't wrong at all, but it sounds unnatural to use those words to talk about food. The suggesting that I gave you is only one of many, many things you could have said.

Sep 21, 2014 22:06 Public Chili Spiced Mango

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