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keloiid
  • Local beef, called Kubiki wagyu, was beyond my expectation.
  • The local beef, called Kubiki wagyu, surpassed my expectations.

Jul 6, 2014 06:03 Public A Hot-Spring Inn in Niigata
matt_
  • The flat position of the seat was very comfortable to sleep.
  • The flat position of the seat was very comfortable to sleep in.
  • This sentence reads a little strange. A nice way to word this sentence might be 'Putting the seat in a flat position made it very comfortable to sleep in'

Jul 5, 2014 20:59 Public Business Class of ANA
Exis Night
  • It strengthens the sweetness of sake, on the other hand the bubbles freshen our mouth.
  • Its natural sweetness has been enhanced, but the bubbles freshen the palate.
  • Or: "...but the carbonation cleanses the palate."
palate

Jul 5, 2014 20:47 Public Japanese Sparkring Sake
Rob
  • I will listen to one chapter everyday from today.
  • I will listen to one chapter every day from today.
  • every day - each day everyday - e.g. "everyday speech", "everyday chores" - something encountered on a day-to-day basis

Jun 8, 2014 19:07 Public 15 Invaluable Law of Growth
sammysanchez
  • It's a symptom that I feel stress without noticing.
  • It's a symptom that I feel stress without noticing.
  • Good, but this might be better: "It's a symptom of unconscious stress."

Jun 7, 2014 20:45 Public Stress
platyphylla
  • We arrived at the stadium about two hours before the game because of no traffic on the way.
  • We arrived at the stadium about two hours before the game because there was no traffic on the way.
  • Your sentence makes sense, but it's not really how it would be said on conversation. You'd say 'because there was no traffic' or 'because there was so little traffic'.
I should have said that there was so little traffic.

May 13, 2014 20:15 Public LA Dodgers vs SF Giants
Eddie
  • I will never buy it in my life.
  • I will never buy it in my life. I don't think I will buy them again.

Apr 16, 2014 19:19 Public Jelly Beans
StupidIdealist
  • The staff didn’t know how to handle the problem, then she consulted with his supervisor, and then the supervisor, who couldn’t solve the problem, asked her boss.
  • The staff on-duty didn’t know how to handle the problem, so she consulted with his supervisor, but the supervisor, who couldn’t also solve the problem, eventually asked her boss.

Apr 16, 2014 19:12 Public Proffesional Manner
bmj
  • I will visit a new customer company, which chose our company to arrange their tour in November through the competitive bid process, with my subordinates.
  • My subordinates and I will visit a new client company, which, through a competitive bid process, chose our company to arrange their tour in November.

Mar 31, 2014 20:25 Public Acknowledgment
bmj
  • After looking around the museum, my arrogant image to the President Reagan was changed to the warn-hearted leader, as the museum intended.
  • After looking around the museum, my arrogant image of President Reagan was changed to one of a warm-hearted leader, as the museum intended.

Mar 31, 2014 20:23 Public The Reagan Museum

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