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Innerseek
  • He looked tired with the pale color of his face.
  • He looked tired and pale.

Mar 23, 2015 16:41 Public Lunch Meeting in Hawaii
bridget
  • Yesterday, I came back from 3days business trip to Florida.
  • Yesterday, I came back from a three-day business trip to Florida.

Mar 16, 2015 16:06 Public Spring has come?
keithrmcd
  • It’s good space for me to wait for my airplane doing business.
  • It’s good place to wait for my next airplane. Or maybe: It’s a good stopover where I can do a little work while waiting for my next plane.

Mar 15, 2015 16:22 Public LaGuardia Airport in NY
markbellis
  • Then, I called to the landowner.
  • Then, I called to the landlord.
  • 'called to' would be if you were speaking to him directly person to person, not on the telephone

Feb 28, 2015 21:30 Public Flood
DrStrangelove
  • I feel at ease with it as a pet because I’m living alone away from my family until the beginning of April.
  • I feel at ease with it as a pet because I’m living alone away from my family until the beginning of April.
  • Your written sentence is generally OK, however it is a bit difficult to understand. I would consider something like this... "Because I'm living alone, away from my family, I can get lonely and Braava helps keep me company like a pet." Or, "Because I'm living alone, away from my family, Braava has been like a pet to me." I think that's close to your intended meaning.

Feb 28, 2015 21:03 Public Floor Sweeping Robot
Kiara
  • However it was getting lower to be 12F when I came home at 9pm.
  • However it was getting got lower and lower and was 12F when I came by the time I got home at 9pm.

Feb 28, 2015 20:46 Public Uncertain Weather
Kiara
  • It`s not only day by day, but also time by time.
  • It`s not only day by day, but also time hour by time hour.

Feb 28, 2015 20:45 Public Uncertain Weather
Exis Night
  • I recognized Japan’s strengths in the business of manufacturing, especially required preciseness.
  • I recognized Japan’s strengths in the business of manufacturing, in particular its high-precision manufacturing.
  • Or: "I've come to realize that Japanese companies have many strengths when it comes to manufacturing. Their high-precision manufacturing capabilities are of particular note."

Feb 26, 2015 19:18 Public Globalization
Susan
  • The party was finished without any problem.
  • The party was finished without any problems./The party was a success.

Feb 26, 2015 19:14 Public Opening Speech in English
Susan
  • Fortunately I could finish it smoothly without stopping in the middle of it.
  • Fortunately, I could finish it smoothly without a hitch. stopping in the middle of it.
  • "without a hitch" is a fixed phrase means that it went very smoothly.

Feb 26, 2015 19:13 Public Opening Speech in English

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