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Eddie
  • I will never buy it in my life.
  • I will never buy it in my life. I don't think I will buy them again.

Apr 16, 2014 19:19 Public Jelly Beans
StupidIdealist
  • The staff didn’t know how to handle the problem, then she consulted with his supervisor, and then the supervisor, who couldn’t solve the problem, asked her boss.
  • The staff on-duty didn’t know how to handle the problem, so she consulted with his supervisor, but the supervisor, who couldn’t also solve the problem, eventually asked her boss.

Apr 16, 2014 19:12 Public Proffesional Manner
bmj
  • I will visit a new customer company, which chose our company to arrange their tour in November through the competitive bid process, with my subordinates.
  • My subordinates and I will visit a new client company, which, through a competitive bid process, chose our company to arrange their tour in November.

Mar 31, 2014 20:25 Public Acknowledgment
bmj
  • After looking around the museum, my arrogant image to the President Reagan was changed to the warn-hearted leader, as the museum intended.
  • After looking around the museum, my arrogant image of President Reagan was changed to one of a warm-hearted leader, as the museum intended.

Mar 31, 2014 20:23 Public The Reagan Museum
T-dog
  • I bought a souvenir photo taken by the museum staff at the stairs to the plane, at 17 dollars, as my kids had nudged me to buy it so much.
  • I bought a souvenir photo taken by the museum staff at the stairs to the plane, forat 17 dollars, as my kids had nudged me to buy it so much.
  • Prepositions can be tricky at times, usually "for" comes before prices

Mar 31, 2014 20:20 Public The Reagan Museum
garlogan
  • However, I was exhausted because of the cold.
  • However, the cold made me exhausted.

Mar 24, 2014 07:32 Public I Recovered from the Cold
garlogan
  • Just one day off gave me a big damage to my business schedule.
  • Just one day off really put me behind my schedule.

Mar 24, 2014 07:21 Public After the Cold
jamesduffy
  • I was a big fan of Molly Ringwald at that time.
  • This is grammatically correct, but we need more information. "That time" here means "the first time in 27 years" - recently! You mean the time before.You need to say: "When I watched it 27 years ago, I was a big fan of Molly Ringwald." Or: "Before, I was a big fan of Molly Ringwald." Or: "When I first watched it, I was a big fan of Molly Ringwald."

Feb 17, 2014 21:17 Public Pretty in Pink
thegame2
  • There were some menus which we can’t eat at other restaurants in the US, like boiled soft roe.
  • There were some items on the menu which we can’t eat at other restaurants in the US, like boiled soft roe.

Feb 9, 2014 20:49 Public NO1 Izakaya in LA
アレックス
  • I forgot the story of the movie, which Nagisa Oshima directed, and David Bowie, Takeshi Kitano and Ryuichi Sakamto played main characters.
  • I forget the plot for which this song was created for. The movie was directed by Nagisa Oshima, and David Bowie, Takeshi Kitano and Ryuichi Sakamoto played the main characters.

Dec 28, 2013 22:43 Public Merry Christmas, Mr.Laurence

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