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neito_nate
  • Yesterday, I went to San Diego at night suddenly in order to handle a customer problem regardless of Saturday holiday.
  • Yesterday, I went to San Diego at last night suddenly in order to handle a customer problem, regardless of Saturday holiday even though it was Saturday.
  • Instead of "suddenly" it would be more natural to say "on short notice."

Sep 29, 2014 20:43 Public Unlucky Day
Nelson Tan
  • Recently, there are some art galleries, shops and cafes, which are changing the atmosphere to attract general people including tourists.
  • Recently, art galleries, shops and cafes are popping up everywhere, changing the atmosphere to attract even more tourists.

Sep 25, 2014 21:27 Public Graff Tour in LA
SíSePuede
  • I found the tour in Groupon at $12 dollars, which was 50% discount price.
  • I found the tour on Groupon for $12 dollars, which was a 50% discount price.

Sep 25, 2014 21:21 Public Graff Tour in LA
SíSePuede
  • The  story consists of various elements, love, action, heart-warming, commedy and so on.
  • The story consists of various elements: love, action, heart-warming, commedy and so on.
  • When you list something, like for example the various elements in the story, you should use the:

Sep 25, 2014 21:16 Public No Ordinary Family
nanaoj
  • I opened the bag on the way back to the office to taste it as soon as possible.
  • I opened the bag on the way back to the office to so I could taste it as soon as possible.
  • No mistake here, it's just more natural-sounding the way I wrote it.

Sep 21, 2014 22:07 Public Chili Spiced Mango
nanaoj
  • I love spice and I love dried mango so I thought it would be my ideal food.
  • I love spice and I love dried mango so I thought it would be my ideal food. I would love it. (or "...so I thought it would be perfect for me.")
  • There are no grammar mistakes here. "My ideal food" is just slightly the wrong idea here.

Sep 21, 2014 22:06 Public Chili Spiced Mango
nanaoj
  • I happened to find an attractive product.
  • I happened to find an attractive product. something that I thought looked good.
  • What you wrote isn't wrong at all, but it sounds unnatural to use those words to talk about food. The suggesting that I gave you is only one of many, many things you could have said.

Sep 21, 2014 22:06 Public Chili Spiced Mango
mtheoriex11
  • Last sunday, my family went to Newport Beach for the first time.
  • Last Sunday, my family went to Newport Beach for the first time.
  • American culture: If you take or go with you family, we would say something like, "Last Sunday I took my family to ..." Or, "Last Sunday my family and I went to ..." Or, "Last Sunday our family went to... In your sentence, "Last Sunday my family went to ..." does not necessarily include you.

Sep 17, 2014 20:55 Public Ruby's Diner
lisaaar
  • Toms donates a pair of shoes to poor kids at each time when they sell a pair of shoes.
  • Toms donates a pair of shoes to poor kids at each time when they sell a pair of shoes.
  • use "each time" OR "when", not both. in this case, "each time" sounds better.

Sep 14, 2014 21:46 Public TOMS or BOBS
steven.ciciola
  • Last week, I made a regulation to ban overtime work after 10pm, which was effected on yesterday.
  • Last week, I made a new regulation to ban overtime working overtime (after 10pm), which was effected on came into effect yesterday.

Sep 10, 2014 20:48 Public Overtime Work

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