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BerryParfait
  • I thought that the rich and heavy baked cream cheese was truly American taste.
  • I thought that the rich and heavy baked cream cheese tasted truly American.

Feb 10, 2016 17:22 Public New York Cheese Cake
Exis Night
  • The restaurant is famous for its New York Cheese Cake, which we had not tried it yet.
  • The restaurant is famous for its New York Cheese Cake, which we had not tried up until then.
  • Or: "...which we had not tried yet."

Feb 10, 2016 10:46 Public New York Cheese Cake
Gillian
  • Her enthusiastic talk, sometimes sing and dance, entertained me so much.
  • Her enthusiastic talk, sometimes sing and dance, entertained me so much.
  • It is correct, but it could sound a little smoother. Maybe like, "her talking was so enthusiastic, it was almost a sing and dance! She entertained me so much!"

Feb 7, 2016 20:50 Public Harlem Walking Tour
Gillian
  • She guided the deep mixed American culture visiting the modern historical places, such as Apollo Theater.
  • She guided us through the deep, mixed American culture, visiting showing us the modern historical places, such as Apollo Theater.

Feb 7, 2016 17:10 Public Harlem Walking Tour
whizzcon
  • Anyway, we can’t put all things into our small house in Japan.
  • Anyway, it doesn't matter as we can’t put all of the things into our small house in Japan.

Feb 3, 2016 17:24 Public Moving
misako
  • The company regulation for the maximum quanity was reduced from five years ago when we moved to the US.
  • The company regulation on the maximum quantity allowed has been reduced in the five years since we've moved to the US.

Feb 3, 2016 17:20 Public Moving
Aburi Engawa
  • After sitting the seats, we noticed that the water in the bottle was frozen.
  • After sitting down on our the seats, we noticed that the water in the bottle was frozen.
  • I would say "After we got to our seats"

Jan 28, 2016 22:25 Public Frozen Water
Aburi Engawa
  • On the way to the gate, I bought a bottle of water for my wife and kids who claimed about their thirsty.
  • On the way to the gate, I bought a bottle of water for my wife and kids who claimed about their thirsty. complained that they were thirsty.
  • "Claim" is Japanese-English. We almost always use the word "complain".

Jan 28, 2016 22:24 Public Frozen Water
markbellis
  • I had planned to see a musical but I changed to it because I thought that my boys would be bored on any musicals like me.
  • I had planned to see a musical but I changed to this because I thought that my boys would be bored with any musicals, like me.

Jan 25, 2016 22:36 Public Blue Man
LoveL
  • I wondered how much was the average,which is a mean thinking way.
  • I wondered how much the average person paid,which is a rude thing to wonder.

Jan 19, 2016 17:17 Public Philadelphia 2

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