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イサ
  • I determined to answer it as an English lesson.
  • I determined to answer it as an English lesson. I decided to respond to the survey in English in order to practice speaking English.
  • Your sentence is fine; I understood it. I've just suggested another possibility here. : )

Jul 27, 2015 09:58 Public Telephone Survey
Exis Night
  • I’m interested in if the market will accept it or not
  • I’m interested in whether the market will accept it or not.
  • Or: "I wonder if consumers will embrace the new design."

Jul 27, 2015 09:49 Public Chuck Taylor All Star Ⅱ
Exis Night
  • The traditional basketball shoes called the Chuck Taylor All Star by Converse will be remodeled on 28th July.
  • The iconic basketball shoes called the Chuck Taylor All Star by Converse will be redesigned on the 28th of July.
  • Or: "The new redesign of the iconic Chuck Taylor All Star basketball shoe by Converse will be released on the 28th of July." Clothes, shoes, and accessories are "redesigned".

Jul 27, 2015 09:47 Public Chuck Taylor All Star Ⅱ
Cheese Loyalist
  • A fishing boat throw the fishing net to the sea, the participants of the experience tow the net from the beach and then they can catch the fishes on the net.
  • A fishing boat throws a fishing net into the sea, then participants at the event tow the net from the beach and then they can catch the fishes with the net.
  • "Fish" is a mass noun, like bread, so there is no separate plural form. "Fishes" refers to different species of fish.

Jul 14, 2015 03:36 Public Beach Seine
Kenopsia
  • It was a good family event.
  • It was a good family event.
  • This sentence is grammatically correct, but to make it sound more natural, you could say that 'it was an enjoyable family event'.

Jul 14, 2015 03:33 Public Beach Seine
Kenopsia
  • A fishing boat throw the fishing net to the sea, the participants of the experience tow the net from the beach and then they can catch the fishes on the net.
  • A fishing boat throws the a fishing net into the sea, then the participants of the experience tow the net from the beach and then they can catch the some fishes on with the net.

Jul 14, 2015 03:32 Public Beach Seine
ebh
  • She has a little difficulty to walk because of numbness in her right arm and leg.
  • She has a little difficulty walking because of numbness in her right arm and leg.

Jul 13, 2015 02:55 Public Aging
ebh
  • After the entrance, it was crowded with a lot of people.
  • After the entrance, it was crowded with a lot of people. After I made it through the entrance, I encountered a large crowd of people.

Jul 13, 2015 02:50 Public VISA
ebh
  • Next time I will stay near the Narita airport, I will choose this hotel.
  • The next time I stay near the Narita airport, I will choose this hotel.

Jul 13, 2015 02:40 Public Mercure Narita
FandeBach
  • The topics is changing one by one.
  • The topics is change one after the other by one.

Jul 4, 2015 18:29 Public Talkative Boss

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