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JohnD
  • My kids complained about it saying that they would not like to board on such a long flight.
  • My kids complained about it, saying that they would not like to be on such a long flight.
  • "Boarding" literally just means getting on the plane.

Aug 17, 2015 06:56 Public Long Flight
JohnD
  • They were exhausted for 13 hours flight.
  • They were exhausted from the 13 hour flight.
  • If you are describing a duration and the time goes before the subject, you don't use an "s".

Aug 17, 2015 06:56 Public Long Flight
stealthflower
  • I understand their feeling.
  • I understand their feelings.

Aug 17, 2015 06:50 Public Long Flight
Exis Night
  • I hope he and other old familiar friends will remind us with lagugh.
  • I hope he and all our old friends will reward us with laughs.

Aug 16, 2015 16:21 Public Video Letter
Exis Night
  • Yesterday, I shot a video letter to celebrate my ex colleague's 60th birthday with my current colleague who used to work with us together.
  • Yesterday, I shot a video letter to celebrate my ex colleague's 60th birthday with my current colleague who used to work with us together.
  • More naturally: "Yesterday I shot a video letter with a colleague to celebrate the 60th birthday of an ex-colleague who used to work with us."

Aug 16, 2015 16:18 Public Video Letter
イサ
  • I determined to answer it as an English lesson.
  • I determined to answer it as an English lesson. I decided to respond to the survey in English in order to practice speaking English.
  • Your sentence is fine; I understood it. I've just suggested another possibility here. : )

Jul 27, 2015 09:58 Public Telephone Survey
Exis Night
  • I’m interested in if the market will accept it or not
  • I’m interested in whether the market will accept it or not.
  • Or: "I wonder if consumers will embrace the new design."

Jul 27, 2015 09:49 Public Chuck Taylor All Star Ⅱ
Exis Night
  • The traditional basketball shoes called the Chuck Taylor All Star by Converse will be remodeled on 28th July.
  • The iconic basketball shoes called the Chuck Taylor All Star by Converse will be redesigned on the 28th of July.
  • Or: "The new redesign of the iconic Chuck Taylor All Star basketball shoe by Converse will be released on the 28th of July." Clothes, shoes, and accessories are "redesigned".

Jul 27, 2015 09:47 Public Chuck Taylor All Star Ⅱ
Cheese Loyalist
  • A fishing boat throw the fishing net to the sea, the participants of the experience tow the net from the beach and then they can catch the fishes on the net.
  • A fishing boat throws a fishing net into the sea, then participants at the event tow the net from the beach and then they can catch the fishes with the net.
  • "Fish" is a mass noun, like bread, so there is no separate plural form. "Fishes" refers to different species of fish.

Jul 14, 2015 03:36 Public Beach Seine
Kenopsia
  • It was a good family event.
  • It was a good family event.
  • This sentence is grammatically correct, but to make it sound more natural, you could say that 'it was an enjoyable family event'.

Jul 14, 2015 03:33 Public Beach Seine

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