Hot Sauce "Luisiana"

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Mar 23, 2016 00:06
I will move back to Japan tomorrow.
Yesterday, I bought souvenir for my friends.
It must be cheap which will not makes them feel pressure for reciprocal gift.
It must also be small which I will carry to Japan in my suitcase.
I chose a small bottle of hot sauce called “Louisiana” which is my favorite one.
I hope my friends like it.
Ernest
Mar 23, 2016 00:16
  • Hot Sauce "Luisiana"

  • Hot Sauce "Louisiana"

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • I will move back to Japan tomorrow.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • Yesterday, I bought souvenir for my friends.

  • Yesterday, I bought a souvenir for my friends.

    Or, if you bought more than one souvenir, it would be "souvenirs".

 
  • It must be cheap which will not makes them feel pressure for reciprocal gift.

  • It must be cheap so they will not feel pressured to give a reciprocal gift.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • It must also be small which I will carry to Japan in my suitcase.

  • It must also be small in order to carry it to Japan in my suitcase.

 
  • I chose a small bottle of hot sauce called “Louisiana” which is my favorite one.

  • I chose a small bottle of hot sauce called “Louisiana”, which is my favorite one.

 
  • I hope my friends like it.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 

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