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May 20th 2012 21:00
I attended an open class of my elder son’s elementary school.
It was interesting to see him in his relationship with his friends.
I recognized he has his own social life aside from our family.
He is growing up.
Larry
Thank you for your correction!
May 20th 2012 21:10
  • I attended an open class of my elder son’s elementary school.

  • I attended an open class of my elder son’s elementary school.

    I attended my older son's elementary school open class (day)

 
  • It was interesting to see him in his relationship with his friends.

  • It was interesting to see him in his relationship with his friends.

    interacting with...

 
  • I recognized he has his own social life aside from our family.

  • I recognized he has his own social life aside from our family.

    realized

 
May 21st 2012 19:21 Akira
Thank you, Larry-san.
Syk3
Thank you for your correction!
May 20th 2012 21:10
  • I attended an open class of my elder son’s elementary school.

  • I attended an open class of ("at" may be better here, because it's "at the school") my elder son’s elementary school.

 
  • It was interesting to see him in his relationship with his friends.

  • It was interesting to see him in his relationships with his friends.

 
That must be very interesting for a parent!
May 21st 2012 19:29 Akira
Yes, it's very interesting for us.
Thank you for your corrections, Syk3.
Mardie
May 20th 2012 21:24
  • I attended an open class of my elder son’s elementary school.

  • I attended an open class of at my elder son’s elementary school.

 
  • It was interesting to see him in his relationship with his friends.

  • It was interesting to see him in his relationship with his friends.

 
  • He is growing up.

  • He is growing up.

    As the topic of the last two sentences is closely related and the second sentence is so short it would be more natural to join them in the one sentence.

    As both parts can independently make their own sentences a semicolon should be used to join them. "I recognized he has his own social life aside from our family; he is growing up."

 
May 21st 2012 19:31 Akira
“

  • He is growing up.

    As the topic of the last two sentences is closely related and the second sentence is so short it would be more natural to join them in the one sentence.

    As both parts can independently make their own sentences a semicolon should be used to join them. "I recognized he has his own social life aside from our family; he is growing up."

”
Oh, it sounds natural. I remember the way to join the sentences with semicolon.
May 21st 2012 19:32 Akira
Thank you, Mardie-san.
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