What do you think of my English skill???
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Hi!Everyone!!
I'm doing well:)
I enjoy reading your article very much.
By the way, I have a question.
What do you think my English skill??
I know it is very tough question, because even if you think my English skill is terrible, you can't say the true feeling...Ha ha ha:)
But don't hesitate to say it;)
Because I really want to get to know how much English speakers understand what I want to say.
Even if I asked some teachers in English school, they wouldn't say the truth, because I'm considered as a customer for them.(This is Japanese business style) If I'm upset, this would be getting involved in trouble.(I won't be upset, because I just want to know the truth.)
So please read my latest article written on Nov. 2nd(If you have enough time to read, please read other articles.)
And give me some comments including details about my weak points.
And give me a score for the article(Full marks is 100 points)
I hope I can get over 40 points out of 100!!
Some examples for comments
A)英語の文章ひとつひとつは、まぁまぁ良いと思いますが、
文章の流れが『起承転結』っぽくなっていて、何が言いたいのかわからない
B)文章全体を読めば、何が言いたいか理解できますが、一つ一つの文章が不自然です。
I'm doing well:)
I enjoy reading your article very much.
By the way, I have a question.
What do you think my English skill??
I know it is very tough question, because even if you think my English skill is terrible, you can't say the true feeling...Ha ha ha:)
But don't hesitate to say it;)
Because I really want to get to know how much English speakers understand what I want to say.
Even if I asked some teachers in English school, they wouldn't say the truth, because I'm considered as a customer for them.(This is Japanese business style) If I'm upset, this would be getting involved in trouble.(I won't be upset, because I just want to know the truth.)
So please read my latest article written on Nov. 2nd(If you have enough time to read, please read other articles.)
And give me some comments including details about my weak points.
And give me a score for the article(Full marks is 100 points)
I hope I can get over 40 points out of 100!!
Some examples for comments
A)英語の文章ひとつひとつは、まぁまぁ良いと思いますが、
文章の流れが『起承転結』っぽくなっていて、何が言いたいのかわからない
B)文章全体を読めば、何が言いたいか理解できますが、一つ一つの文章が不自然です。
I know it is very tough question, because even if you think my English skill is terrible, you can't say the true feeling... don't want to say what you really think... (In this case, you would say this because you are saying people can't really say what they really "think", however if you were to say "even if you feel my English skill is terrible", then you would say "you can't say how you really feel about it..." Also, you don't need to call it "English skill", you can just refer to it as your English. For example: My English is very professional. (you don't need to use the word skill here because when you say it is your own English, the word skill is already implied) ^.^ Sorry if this is confusing!
English is a very difficult and confusing language, so I'm always wondering why people want to learn it. Even when your English entries have some mistakes, I still understand what you are saying ^.^ Be proud of your English ability ^.^ As for a score on this article...hmm...75/100 :D
There aren't very many things that you need to improve on to be honest ^.^ One thing you could work on would be, the way you word some things and what words you use in certain situations ^.^ To improve on this, you should try reading someone's blog written in English ^.^ On Google, you can look for different blogs on a website called Blogger(It might be called Blogspot but I'm not sure ^.^;) If you go to it, it will ask you to make an account but if you search for a blog on the website about something you like, just search the topic you are looking for and then type "blogger" or "blogspot" next to it ^.^ Sorry if that was confusing!
Some people say Japanese is the most difficult language in the world, others say lerning English is very difficult because English has the most expressions in the world!
As I folllow your advice, I would be trying to use "words" and "expressions" in certain situations;)
The reason why Japanese people love lerning Einglish is that
We think everything coming from other countries including English are unusual and out of ordinary since we are living in an island country.So we feel they are cool:)
English is a really weird language ^.^ Many commonly used English words aren't really formal words generally! For example, most people don't say "going to", instead they say "gunna" or "gonna" which is just a shortened version. Also, there is a lot of words that are words for being sarcastic or joking around! For example, the phrase "shank you". Normally "shank" is a slang word that means to stab someone or something. However in this case, it's used as a joking phrase to say thank you. ^.^
You're doing wonderfully at English ^.^ Good luck! :D
正直言って、言いたいことがよく伝わるし文法もだいたい合っているのですが、句読点が間違っていてちょっと読みにくいです。
例：
Hi!Everyone!!
I'm doing well:)
Hi!の後、スペースを空けずにEveryoneを書いて、その後に「！」を二つつけること。
次の文の最後にペリオドを打たずに、スペースを空けずに、smilelyをつけること。
かなり子供っぽい書き方だと思います。文法の可笑しい文を混ぜてしまうと一段と読みにくくなります。携帯のメールじゃあるまいし、「文」を書いた方が良いと思いますよ。
100点満点の60点です。
Following your advice, I'll try to write some sentences.