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Apr 11, 2011 02:14 xChilla made 11 corrections for Describing chart population...
I've never heard the term "Rich Asia Pacific" maybe it's common in Japan, but we don't use that term in the US. I t...
Apr 10, 2011 04:35 Patch made 11 corrections for Violent TV Programs
Interesting blog. I agree with you on many points. What do you think about 'hentai anime'? (particularly from 80's & 90&#...
Apr 9, 2011 12:52 xChilla made 4 corrections for Working Parents
Nicely written! :)
Apr 7, 2011 14:41 xChilla made 4 corrections for I am living in London.
お久しぶりですね! How exciting! I'm happy for you! :) I hope you have an amazing time in London!
Apr 6, 2011 18:50 kylepw made 13 corrections for Rounding SUSHI Restaurant
I'm used to 回転寿司 myself but I think at first, foreigners will think it's strange/interesting!
Mar 4, 2011 01:19 kiwi-boy made 9 corrections for Amazing Brain
Sorry no offence, the (~)are jokes only.
Mar 3, 2011 18:04 kiwi-boy made 6 corrections for Mind Map
Me too! I studied his method back in my old university days. It is a good method but it takes time for us to use freely as our brains nee...
Feb 23, 2011 13:01 xChilla made 11 corrections for Graffiti
This was a really interesting topic! Thank you for sharing. Also your English was very well written and there were few mistakes. :)
Feb 17, 2011 07:33 xChilla made 11 corrections for The way to be popular among...
This is my suggestion about how to make your conclusion shorter and more natural, but with the same meaning. In conclusion, the articl...
Feb 15, 2011 00:40 Patch made 5 corrections for It is snowing now!
もしかして、三重県に住んでいますか? あいう天気なら、普通の時速でもトロトロしている車がいることですね 危な~い >< 僕は雪があんまり好きじゃないです。
Feb 14, 2011 02:08 xChilla made 7 corrections for My latest score
おめでとうございます! That's so great!! Congratz, I'm happy for you!
Feb 13, 2011 02:43 xChilla made 12 corrections for Physical education
Very well written :) I thought I'd give you some tips on how to make your sentences more varied (instead of using similar words mu...
Feb 11, 2011 18:42 Patch made 12 corrections for Economic situation of the w...
Well done on this. If you have any questions on the corrections please ask Patch
Feb 5, 2011 01:54 xChilla made 7 corrections for Refound
That's so great! From your last journal about this, I know you were upset. So I'm really happy to hear this as well, you deserved...
Feb 1, 2011 02:13 Omar made 5 corrections for The First symptom of hay fever
The cherry blossoms must be very beautiful. Take care.
Jan 31, 2011 23:49 kylepw made 5 corrections for My targets
Your entry is so full of energy and courage. I know you'll do fine in the UK because your mind is mature. Work hard and play hard!
Jan 31, 2011 23:46 kylepw commented on My targets
Your entry is so full of energy and courage. I know you'll do fine in the UK because your mind is mature. Work hard and play hard!
Jan 29, 2011 00:37 xChilla made 10 corrections for Mobile phones again
When you're talking about more than one thing, make sure and talk in PLURALS in all of the sentence. Overall this was very well writt...
Jan 28, 2011 07:27 Omar made 5 corrections for Give me a student VISA!
That is so exciting, I hope you are able to enroll! Good luck!
Jan 28, 2011 04:30 xChilla made 7 corrections for The flu of birds
That's really too bad!! I hope they can get it under control... I would be upset if I couldn't eat chicken because it's my fa...
Jan 27, 2011 23:32 xChilla commented on Give me a student VISA!
Good Luck! You can do it! I hope it turns out well :)
Jan 23, 2011 01:23 xChilla made 5 corrections for Burned Curry
Aww, that's too bad about your curry!! I bet it would have been delicious. Hopefully you try again soon :D
Jan 21, 2011 02:35 Nob commented on My data is increasing!
コツコツやるしかないですね。個人的な経験談として助言させていただくと、はじめに構想を考えておき、ある区切りが来るまでは、いかなる改善案があろうとも構造を変えないことですね。そうしないと、あとから見直したとき、あるいは整理するときに頭が混乱します。区切りが来たら、いっきにアッ...
Jan 17, 2011 01:41 xChilla made 15 corrections for Probrems during the exam
Aw, I'm sorry you had such a hard time. I hope they get back to you soon and let you try again. It's unfortunate but don't gi...
Jan 15, 2011 02:01 xChilla made 5 corrections for I am going to take an exam ...
I hope you do well on your test! A teacher once told me that you will do better on tests if you go in confident! I'm not sure if it&#...
Jan 13, 2011 05:25 Omar made 5 corrections for Graphs of Riverdale public ...
Interesting study, I wonder what it means...
Jan 11, 2011 02:26 Omar made 8 corrections for Food Budget and Number of Meas
Very interesting data you have there. This may also be leading to an increase in health problems worldwide. Thanks for sharing
Jan 9, 2011 01:58 thuongpotter commented on Children have mobile phones.
それは私も感慨しました。でも、もし、何か悪いあった時、子供が自分に守れます。 しかし、あなたの意見は間違わないんです。 私の国では子供が携帯電話がある時、先生の間違いことをとって、インタネットにアップロードしました。あとで、あの先生は仕事を止めました。今子供はちょっと悪...
Jan 7, 2011 22:16 commented on Children have mobile phones.
そうですね。 子供は電話を待つはずじゃありません。
Jan 7, 2011 02:44 Omar made 3 corrections for Women's job 2
That is very interesting. Thanks for sharing.
Jan 6, 2011 02:37 xChilla made 9 corrections for Women's job
I very much agree with you! Men and women should be treated more equally! In the US, even though things are much more equal than the past...
Jan 6, 2011 02:07 Omar made 4 corrections for New Mac!
Congratulations on your new Macintosh computer! I love using Macs too, they are great. Please enjoy it.
Jan 6, 2011 01:12 kafeiro made 5 corrections for The special food after New ...
I'd like to try proper nanakusagaya, too. I've tried one before, but not the traditional way. It's really pleasant~
Jan 3, 2011 08:35 xChilla made 9 corrections for A Happy New Year
It's kind of hard to explain but I think it's better to say "spend more money" instead of "more expensive." ...
Jan 1, 2011 06:25 xChilla made 13 corrections for The level of the suffering ...
I understand what you're talking about, but I don't get what this has to do with a 90% suffering level? How is this related to yo...
Dec 31, 2010 06:15 xChilla made 9 corrections for How to describe graphs
I bet the figures are somewhat similar in the US and other countries in the world. I know my family has not been able to vacation like we...
Dec 31, 2010 05:28 xChilla made 7 corrections for Money
I think you tried to make this point.. but it would be better to more clearly state that money is not the only thing that leads to succes...
Dec 30, 2010 01:31 thuongpotter made 6 corrections for Midnight chocolates
It's alright,anyway, don't use too much complex word. Just use very easy word but it could make the situation clearer. 簡単なことをかった...
Dec 30, 2010 00:38 thuongpotter made 7 corrections for Describing graphs 2
That's all i know. I'm not a native English speaker, though.
Dec 26, 2010 07:14 xChilla made 9 corrections for Moving and 断捨離(Danshari)
In the US we usually call people who keep lots of things for a long time "a pack rat" I don't like to throw out my things s...
Dec 20, 2010 05:41 xChilla made 6 corrections for Forager bees
Usually when you have shorter sentences you don't always need to put a comma. I think it's a little complicated but if you can sa...
Dec 18, 2010 04:05 xChilla made 3 corrections for Volunteer
I somewhat agree, but I think the main reason colleges do this is because it helps build character and helps them grow as a person. (a mo...
Dec 18, 2010 00:39 AndrewFM made 3 corrections for Volunteer
I agree. I think it is good for people to give Scholarships to people who do volunteer work, in order to help them afford their education...
Dec 17, 2010 04:16 xChilla made 5 corrections for Hours of sunlight
I love sunshine too :)
Dec 17, 2010 03:47 xChilla made 10 corrections for Internet shopping
I love shopping online for the same reasons you mentioned! What's better is if you can find an online coupon code to use when you che...
Dec 14, 2010 09:39 xChilla made 8 corrections for Time seems to pass very fir...
Try not to worry! You are doing your best and that's what matters! I'm sure you improve a lot every day! I think... the more mist...
Dec 13, 2010 03:18 xChilla made 8 corrections for Scholarships
I agree! Although I think people who get good grades deserve a reward, I don't think it's fair if they are financially stable and...
Dec 9, 2010 10:03 xChilla made 1 corrections for I 'm tired. ふ~つかれた~。
Starting with "though" in this case makes it sound like an incomplete sentence. It's a bit difficult to explain but I'l...
Dec 9, 2010 06:54 Tsogie made 7 corrections for Do I have Cancer??
Your English is good. NO worries, You can get over it! Cheers!
Dec 7, 2010 08:01 commented on Do I have Cancer??
Best of luck and get well soon!!