it called: The Date
It was a sunny but windy day when they had their first date. They sat in a little coffee shop in the suburb of the city. He waited for this meeting for a long time and hoped it will work alright between them.
She had blue eyes and when he looked into her eyes they remind him his hometown. Her eyes were like the sky he could see in his childhood, through the windows of his grandfather home, which was in the top of a little hill way back, up there, in the north. He loved to go there when he was a little boy and used to be there for hours. He continued to go there till the day his grandfather died. His dad once told him that his grandfather bought this home from an old man which fought in many wars. "Not here" he said "in the place he came from", but he never told him where it was.
She smiled at him but he didn't smile back. He remembered his grandfather's funeral. It was the mid of June when his grandfather went to fishing in the near lake and drowned there. No one is really sure what happened in this day. "Don't be sad about him" his dad told him, "anyway he was just old, crazy man". Those words didn't help; he loved this imperfect, damaged, old, crazy man.
"Is every thing is alright?" she asked him. "Ha yes, just…thoughts".
In July of the same year he sat with his mom to a cup of cold tee, to speak a bit about this and that. "I wanted to tell you something and I want you not to take it too hard" she said. "Me and your dad, well, there is no easy way to say it…" he looked at her; she seems to be sad, but with some hope in her deep green eyes." We decided to divorce". He couldn't believe. "What? Why? You are married like since ever". His mom groaned. "It is boring to wake up every day and to see the same pace, to be with someone that you know every thing about him. I want something new, I want to open new chapter in my life". "You are 45, mom! What new chapter? You and dad, you date since high school! You all what you know, you all what you have!" she stood up "you don't understand". "You can't do it! You destroy all what you built for years!" he stood up as well, he went to her. "Mom, don't". "What do you understand? You know shit! You are still in diapers". He went away. He shaved his head.
In September of the same year he came home to say "mom, dad I'm going to the army". They told him not to but he packaged a bag and took a bus, left his hometown for good.
"Ha I wonder what you think of" she said and she looked into his green eyes and His green eyes reminded her the green trees around the little peaceful village she grow up in, way back, there in Holland.
ok hope you loved it and that someone will correct it XD
anyway- have a good day! : )
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I decided to practice in english so I wrote some short story. nothing special, really just for practice. anyway I hope you will find it nice and that it not too bad. it called: The Date It was a sunny but windy day when they had their first date. They sat in a little coffee shop in the suburb