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I tried solving the questions of English composition in the English exam !
if the following sentences don't make sense ,
pls correct them X(
1.In Japan , our trip overseas not only for our job but also for our pleasure has been common experiences for many people.
2.The rapid decline in the birth rate these years and aging of society due to longer life spans are causing many people.
3.Taking advantage of the right person at the right place means , in other word, using and then taking away .
if the following sentences don't make sense ,
pls correct them X(
1.In Japan , our trip overseas not only for our job but also for our pleasure has been common experiences for many people.
2.The rapid decline in the birth rate these years and aging of society due to longer life spans are causing many people.
3.Taking advantage of the right person at the right place means , in other word, using and then taking away .
In Japan, our trips overseas not only for our one's job but also for our one's pleasure have been common experiences for many (Japanese) people.
The rapid decline in the birthrate these years and the aging of society due to longer lifespans are causing many people. (Maybe you mean to write: "The rapid decline in the birthrate and the aging of society over the years is caused by longer lifespans." Also, in English "birth rate" and "life spans" are single words, as in "birthrate" and "lifespans.")
Taking advantage of the right person at in the right place means, in other words, using and then taking away. (確かに、この文は正しいですけれど、ちょっと不自然です。 Usually, the expression we say is "the right person at the right time," but your sentence is still correct.）