Pls correct them.

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Jun 26, 2011 18:59
I tried solving the questions of English composition in the English exam !

if the following sentences don't make sense ,
pls correct them X(

1.In Japan , our trip overseas not only for our job but also for our pleasure has been common experiences for many people.

2.The rapid decline in the birth rate these years and aging of society due to longer life spans are causing many people.

3.Taking advantage of the right person at the right place means , in other word, using and then taking away .