A Schoolboy Fell Down In A Train

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Apr 6, 2011 10:22
A schoolboy fell down in a train during few second times when I came to the office.
I was going to help him, but I couldn't do it because it was very crowded.
Fortunately, he wasn't hit his head on the floor because the passenger around him made him supported.
Then he got off at the next station.
Probably it is an anemia or an epilepsy attack, I guess.
巧実
Apr 6, 2011 10:44
  • Fortunately, he wasn't hit his head on the floor because the passenger around him made him supported.

  • Fortunately, his head didn't hit against the floor because the passenger around him made him supported.

 

お添削を参考までにしてください。症状によって（ただ転落して）癲癇や貧血を判明できますか？

Apr 6, 2011 11:39 kensa
今までの経験から判断しました。
この他にもシリアスな疾患もありますが、若者であることすぐに立ち上がり何もなかったように下車したので、彼にとってなじんだ疾患と考えました。
当所の若いスタッフに尋ねたところ、一過性脳虚血または膠原病関連と言ってます。
正解はありません。
Akiko
Apr 6, 2011 12:01
  • A Schoolboy Fell Down In A Train

  • A Schoolboy Fell Down In On A The Train

 
  • A schoolboy fell down in a train during few second times when I came to the office.

  • I saw a schoolboy fell fall down in on a the train during few second times when when when I came I was riding it (the train) to the office for the second time. - I am not sure what you wanted to say here. I made the correction assuming you saw the boy fall when you were riding the train back to work after lunch or coming to work on your second day. If you want, please explain this to me more so that I can write a better correction :)

 
  • Fortunately, he wasn't hit his head on the floor because the passenger around him made him supported.

  • Fortunately, he wasn't didn't hit his head on the floor because the passengers around him made him supported him.

 
  • Probably it is an anemia or an epilepsy attack, I guess.

  • Probably it is an I think it was anaemia or an epilepsy attack, I guess.

 

Apr 6, 2011 14:50 kensa
Thanks Akiko. I meant below.
When I was sitting on the train's seat, a student became unconscious in a train and he fell down. It was an incident within 1 minutes.
Akiko
Apr 6, 2011 12:06
  • Probably it is an anemia or an epilepsy attack, I guess.

  • Probably it is an I think it might have been anaemia or an epilepsy attack, I guess - I think it sounds better now :D

 
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