Have You Been to "Disney Sea"?
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We went to Disney Sea.
I checked up about the rides and the shows in website before going.
I think a person who has visited there many times maybe understood the map of the inside, but I couldn't easily understand it.
I aimed for a huge volcano because I visited it for the first time.
Because it's huge, we can see it before entering Disney Sea.
This volcano was most suitable for the mark.
We waited for 45-150 minutes until we can get on the attractive rides.
We went on last Saturday, the entrance was restricted.
And the ticket on that day wasn't sold until 6 pm.
According to my daughter, we shouldn't have visited there because we expected the crowd on weekend December.
According to the grandchild who went together, the waiting time is much so that popularity of the ride is high.
Then she didn't mind the waiting time.
We weren't able to use restroom, a popcorn stand and restaurants without making the long line.
However it was very fun.
I checked up about the rides and the shows in website before going.
I think a person who has visited there many times maybe understood the map of the inside, but I couldn't easily understand it.
I aimed for a huge volcano because I visited it for the first time.
Because it's huge, we can see it before entering Disney Sea.
This volcano was most suitable for the mark.
We waited for 45-150 minutes until we can get on the attractive rides.
We went on last Saturday, the entrance was restricted.
And the ticket on that day wasn't sold until 6 pm.
According to my daughter, we shouldn't have visited there because we expected the crowd on weekend December.
According to the grandchild who went together, the waiting time is much so that popularity of the ride is high.
Then she didn't mind the waiting time.
We weren't able to use restroom, a popcorn stand and restaurants without making the long line.
However it was very fun.

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I looked up information about the rides and the shows on the website before going.
I think it's easy to understand the map if you have visited many times, but I couldn't easily understand it.
This volcano was the most suitable as a landmark.
According to my daughter, we shouldn't have visited there because we expected the crowd on a weekend in December.
According to the grandchild who went together, the waiting time is long because of the popularity of the ride is high, so she didn't mind the waiting time.
Then she didn't mind the waiting time.
We weren't able to use the restroom, a popcorn stand and restaurants without waiting in the long line.
However, it was very fun.
I've only been to Disneyland in California. Too bad about the waiting time, though. 150 minutes is a long wait.
The long waiting time is bad, I agreed with you.
Excuse me, but do we need "of" after "because"?
It's either "because of the popularity of the ride" or "because the popularity of the ride is high". "Because of" is followed by a noun or the ING form of a verb.
I'm lucky to get prompt reply.
Usually I write a journal per a day.
Today's title "using the heater is comfortable."
Thanks in advance.
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We left the home at 7:30.
The Joban expressway was able to run smoothly, but the Bay Shore line was crowded. And the electricity board said at Moriya "120 minutes to Maihama".
3 grandchildren got tired of keeping still in my car.
We had to drive slowly and at near Maihama we saw Ferris wheel and the Disney’s volcano.
At first I looked for a parking lot because some parking lots were full.
The charge of the parking lot was free because of the crowd.
We waited a little time to exchange the prepaid ticket for an admission ticket.
The Joban Expressway was able to run smoothly, buy the Bay Shore line was crowded. And the sign (I'm not sure what the proper name would be, but electricity board sounds awkward) at Moriya said "120 minutes to Maihama".
My three grandchildren go tired of keeping still in my car. We had to drive slowly, and when we were near Maihama, we saw the Ferris wheel and Disney's volcano.
At first I was looking for a parking lot because some parking lots were full.
Parking was free because of the crowd.
We waited for a short time to exchange the prepaid ticket for an admission ticket.
Hope this helps! Sounded like quite the adventure!
In Japan we often see the information for the traffic jam on the board written by electricity on the highway.
we call it "電光掲示板" in Japanese.
I'm looking forward to it.