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Daring

Jul 03rd 2009 11:57

The weather can affect a person emotionally. Today I am happy because it is sunshine and it is not hot.
I got up earlier than before. Because I would wash colothes, cook breakfast, cleaning, memorizing words and practice oral English. Live alone, but more like a woman.
Life is beautiful, I will do my wills (How to say "做自己愿意做的事情"?). I will still work hard towad the direction of my heart. I can because I can.
Sometimes life need courage, love need courage and all need courage. Everyday is a new start. We should face up to all. (How to say “我们应该勇敢面对”).
To be a brave person.

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cpaster

Jul 03rd 2009 12:26

Arrow_31_dummyToday I am happy because it is sunshine and it is not hot.
Arrow_31Today I am happy because it is sunny and it is not hot.
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Arrow_31_dummyI got up earlier than before.
Arrow_31I got up earlier than before,
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Arrow_31_dummyBecause I would wash colothes, cook breakfast, cleaning, memorizing words and practice oral English.
Arrow_31, in order to wash clothes, cook breakfast, do some cleaning, memorize words and practice oral English.
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Arrow_31_dummyLive alone, but more like a worman.
Arrow_31Live alone, but more like a worman.
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Arrow_31_dummyLife is beautiful, I will do my wills (How to say "做自己愿意做的事情"?).
Arrow_31Life is beautiful, I will do the things I want to do.
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Arrow_31_dummyI will still work hard towad the direction of my heart.
Arrow_31I will still work hard and follow my heart.
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Arrow_31_dummyI can because I can.
Arrow_31I can because I can.
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Arrow_31_dummySometimes life need courage, love need courage and all need courage.
Arrow_31Sometimes life needs courage, love needs courage and all of us need courage.
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Arrow_31_dummyEveryday is a new start.
Arrow_31Every day is a new start.
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Arrow_31_dummyWe should face up to all.
Arrow_31We should face up to all of life's problems.
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Arrow_31_dummy(How to say “我们应该勇敢面对”).
Arrow_31(How to say “我们应该勇敢面对”).
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Arrow_31_dummyTo be a brave person.
Arrow_31This is how to be a brave person.
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colothes = clothes
worman = woman?
towad = toward

"Live alone, but more like a worman." [woman?]. It's not clear what this means.

"I can because I can". It's a grammatically correct sentence, but what are you trying to say?

"Everyday" is an adjective, it is not the same as "every day" (every + noun).

"To be a brave person." This can be used as a title, but not as a sentence. It is not a complete sentence.

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