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This story was a complete fabrication.
本故事纯属虚构
I write this story just for practice my English writing.
我写这个故事只是为了练习我的英文写作
Chapter One
第一章
There was this girl，her name was Maggie.
有个叫Maggie的女孩
Maggie is a very shy girl，she's always has low selfesteem.
Maggie是个害羞的女孩，她总是很自卑
Three years ago，that was a hot summer's day，she was an average student in a senior middle school.
三年前的那个炎热的夏天，她是一个在高中上学的普通学生
She had a heavy load of classes and she was very tired at that time.
那时她每天都有很多的课，她感觉很累
One day she saw a young man on the way to school.
那个夏天天气很炎热，有一天在上学的路上她遇见了一个男孩
He was in orange t-shirt，flip flops，and blue jeans.
他穿着橙色的体恤衫，蓝色的牛仔裤，脚上是一双人字拖
Maggie felt that he was a special man，because he was so quiet and so handsome in her eye.
Maggie觉得他很与众不同，因为在Maggie的眼里他即安静又帅气
She fell in love with him when she first saw him.
她对他一见钟情
She always tried to meet him on the way to school everyday.
她总是想尽办法在每天上学的路上遇见他
Sometimes she was waited for a long time by stealth.
有时候她会偷偷地等很久
Even so，she saw very little of him.
即使是这样，她也很少看见他
If she saw him that，she marked off the day on her calendar.
如果她遇见他，她会在她的日历上做一个标记
Day by day she knew that he was worked near her house.
渐渐地，她知道了他在她家附近工作
ok，that's chapter one ，next time I’ll post chapter two，and thanks for correct my articles
好了，这就是第一章，下次我会发表第二章，谢谢帮我改正文章
本故事纯属虚构
I write this story just for practice my English writing.
我写这个故事只是为了练习我的英文写作
Chapter One
第一章
There was this girl，her name was Maggie.
有个叫Maggie的女孩
Maggie is a very shy girl，she's always has low selfesteem.
Maggie是个害羞的女孩，她总是很自卑
Three years ago，that was a hot summer's day，she was an average student in a senior middle school.
三年前的那个炎热的夏天，她是一个在高中上学的普通学生
She had a heavy load of classes and she was very tired at that time.
那时她每天都有很多的课，她感觉很累
One day she saw a young man on the way to school.
那个夏天天气很炎热，有一天在上学的路上她遇见了一个男孩
He was in orange t-shirt，flip flops，and blue jeans.
他穿着橙色的体恤衫，蓝色的牛仔裤，脚上是一双人字拖
Maggie felt that he was a special man，because he was so quiet and so handsome in her eye.
Maggie觉得他很与众不同，因为在Maggie的眼里他即安静又帅气
She fell in love with him when she first saw him.
她对他一见钟情
She always tried to meet him on the way to school everyday.
她总是想尽办法在每天上学的路上遇见他
Sometimes she was waited for a long time by stealth.
有时候她会偷偷地等很久
Even so，she saw very little of him.
即使是这样，她也很少看见他
If she saw him that，she marked off the day on her calendar.
如果她遇见他，她会在她的日历上做一个标记
Day by day she knew that he was worked near her house.
渐渐地，她知道了他在她家附近工作
ok，that's chapter one ，next time I’ll post chapter two，and thanks for correct my articles
好了，这就是第一章，下次我会发表第二章，谢谢帮我改正文章
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This story is a complete fabrication.
I write this story just to practice my English writing.
There is this girl，her name is Maggie.
Maggie is a very shy girl，she's always had low self esteem.
Three years ago，it was a hot summer's day，and she was an average student in a senior middle school.
He wore a orange t-shirt，flip flops，and blue jeans.
Maggie felt that he was a special man，because he was so quiet and so handsome in her eyes.
/She fell in love with him when she first saw him/It was love at first sight/ (it's a common phrase)
She always tried to meet him on the way to school everyday.
Despite that，she saw very little of him.
If she saw him that，she marked off that day on her calendar.
Gradually she worked out that he was working near her house.
thanks
haha in the final chapter you'll know the end
I don't know the finish yet
haha
Maggie‘s Story
This story is completely fabricated.
I write this story only to practice my English.
Maggie is very shy and has low self esteem.
Three years ago，she was an average student in a senior high school.
It was a hot summer, she had heavy loads of classes and was very tired.
One day, on the way to school, she saw a young man.
He wore an orange t-shirt，flip flops，and jeans.
Maggie felt he was special because he was so quiet and so handsome in her eyes.
Sometimes she stealthily waited for him for hours.
But even so，she still saw very little of him.
Day by day, she learned that he worked near her house.
Okay，that's chapter one. Next time I’ll post the second chapter，and thanks for editing my articles.
I hope you write something in Chinese，you will improve your English this way.
谢谢