English exam !!

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May 27, 2012 22:56
I had an English examination( TOEIC )..

I didn't answer enough in the settle time( 2 hours ).
And this exam include many business topics.

So I want to know how did you apply for your company??
e-mail? paper-posting? or telling to human resource center?
And how was the interview... :k
poundcaek
May 27, 2012 23:55
  • I had an English examination( TOEIC )..

  • I had an English examination (TOEIC)..

    You may want to add in a word like "today", to will help improve the sentence~

 
  • I didn't answer enough in the settle time( 2 hours ).

  • I didn't answer enough questions in the given time (2 hours).

 
  • And this exam include many business topics.

  • This exam also included many business topics.

 
  • So I want to know how did you apply for your company??

  • So, I would like to know; how did you apply for your company??

    This sentence can use a semicolon. However, it could also be written as: "I would like to know how you applied for your job." ("Job" would fit better than "company".)

 
  • or telling to human resource center?

  • Did you go to a human resource center?

 
  • And how was the interview...

  • How was the interview?

 

There are many other ways to writing some of the things you wrote. :) Overall, very good job!!

Jun 2, 2012 15:14 Sei_3o3
uhhh, difficult to say English in different situation!!
I'll brush up to adapt to different situation!!
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