A Scary Experience For Yesterday

We always sit next to each other, we eat go out for lunch together, and after school we always talk at a coffee shop.

At theat time I was in a train.

We heard the announce an announcement, " Do not go out from the train.

When I looked at my friend, she doesn't seemed not to be scared, and she said, " Do not worry.

It will stop in a few minutes.

I was inspired by people's attitude in Tokyo's attitude.

My friend said that the people in Tokyo have are used to aftershocks.

After I separated my friend, I also again felt another afterschock in Tokyo while I was waiting for my bus.

Both of them were worried about me, and my daughter said that I should not go to Tokyo for a while.

I was am very scared to go to Tokyo right now.

I also received e-mails from my Texan friend and my Jewish friend whom I said to go to told I was going to Tokyo in our conversations.

They were also worried about me.

A Scary Experience For Yesterday

There I have especially have been learning how to paint on pottery with a European style painting there. [Perhaps one sentence for this and the previous one: 'I go to Tokyo twice a month because it is there that I have been learning how to paint on pottery in a European style.']

In addition, I have a good friend who can paint and goes to the same school.

We always sit next to each other, we eat lunch out together and after school we always have a chat at a coffee shop. ['Eat out for lunch' is actually OK but I prefer my version. I think 'have a chat' sounds nice and friendly in this context, instead of 'talk'.]

After school, when I was on the train, I felt a strong shake.

At the time I was in a train. [You can say this, but I prefer combining the sentences.]

I was heading to a department store with my friend to see a porcelain painting show. [Try to avoid just translating xxxx の yyyy into 'yyyy of xxxx' since sometimes it sounds a little strange. It is ok but your English is more advanced than this, so try to change it a little.]

The train that we were on suddenly stopped.

We heard someone announce, " Do not go out from the train. [If you want to use 'announce' it must be like this. However 'heard an announcement' is more natural. Perhaps 'Do not leave the train.' is a natural alternative.]

While everything was shaking, we could not stand by ourselves.

When I looked at my friend, she didn't seem to be scared, and she said, " Don't worry.

It's not so strong. [In the sentences above, I have chosen to abbreviate because you are quoting speech and it sounds more natural. Also, 'seemed not to be scared' has the correct meaning but sounds a little unnatural.]

It'll stop in a few minutes. [I usually would not recommend abbreviating 'It will' but here, in spoken text, it is fine.]

If you are not be able to get home, you can stay at my house.

" After the shaking stopped, the train did not move for thirty minutes.

While everything was shaking, nobody seemed to be panicking or screaming.

I was inspired by Tokyo people's attitude.

My friend said that (the) people in Tokyo are used to aftershocks.

I was surprised and embarrassed because in my mind I was panicking even though I never screamed.

After I separated from my friend, I also felt another aftershock in Tokyo while I was waiting for my bus.

At that time many people seemed to be natural. [You can use 'the' or 'that' but I think 'that' is more natural.]

When I arrived home, I talked about my experiences to my husband and daughter. [I avoid 'got' personally, but it is OK for many people. Perhaps 'I told my husband and daughter about my experience' is more natural for me.]

Both of them started worrying about me and my daughter said that I should not go to Tokyo for a while. [I don't think they can be worried in the past for what they did not know about. However, they could start to worry about future trips.]

I am very scared to go to Tokyo right now.

I received an e-mail from my friend. According to her, last night they experienced a strong shake again.

I also received e-mails from my Texan friend and my Jewish friend whom I told I was going to Tokyo during our conversations.

They were also worried about me.