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Hi, there! It's been a while since I came here, America. I already spent 9 days in Michigan and Florida. My painting class was over yesterday, and I moved to Alabama. I had a great time in Tampa. I learned a lot from my Vietnamese American teacher. My American friend and I signed up a class for next year. I really think my Vietnamese teacher is the best porcelain painter in the world, and I'm so happy to take his class and I'm his favorite student! I'm staying at my other American painting friend's house now. It's my first time to visit here.
I like traveling America's south because it's much closer America that I've been imaging. Houses are bigger, foods' potions are huge and people are much nicer. I will spend 16 days here. I really appreciate to my Alabama friends! I will go to church tomorrow with them. I'm not a Christian, but I'm very curious about Christianity. I'm excited to experience a new thing!
I like traveling America's south because it's much closer America that I've been imaging. Houses are bigger, foods' potions are huge and people are much nicer. I will spend 16 days here. I really appreciate to my Alabama friends! I will go to church tomorrow with them. I'm not a Christian, but I'm very curious about Christianity. I'm excited to experience a new thing!
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Hi there!
The comma is not needed.
My painting class was over yesterday, and I moved to Alabama.
If you can, try to split up the two parts of this sentence. They are not related to each other at all.
I learned a lot from my Vietnamese American Vietnamese-American teacher.
Double nationalities are generally spelled using a hyphen.
I really think my Vietnamese teacher is the best porcelain painter in the world. I'm so happy to take his class and I'm his favorite student!
You should not have an "and" followed by another "and." Splitting the sentences up might give the reader more clarity.
It's my first time visiting here.
I like traveling to the southern America because it's much closer to the America that I've been imagining.
Houses are bigger, foods' portions are huge and people are much nicer.
I really appreciate to my Alabama friends!
Overall your english is very good!
It's great that you are curious about Christianity and I hope you have a wonderful experience. Will it be your first time attending a church?
It's been a while since I came to America.
My painting class ended yesterday, and I went/(moved on) to Alabama.
"I moved to" sounds like you left Fukui for good and are going to live in Alabama from now on.
My American friend and I signed up for a class for next year.
"sign up for" is a set phrase.
I really think my Vietnamese teacher is the best porcelain painter in the world, and I'm so happy to be able to take his class and also to be his favorite student!
I like traveling through America's southern regions because it's much closer to the America that I've been imagining.
Houses are bigger, food portions are larger/(more massive) and people are much nicer.
In a list, I prefer to keep things similar... bigger, larger, nicer. Bigger, huge, and nicer just feels a little clunky to me. But this is an entirely optional change.
I really appreciate to my Alabama friends!
Optional: you can say "Alabamian friends"
I spent 12 years of my childhood in Tampa! I never want to go there ever again (but I'm glad you had fun there. Haha!).
Long time no see, welcome back to the US!
Great job Yumi!
I'm happy you are having a good time, and trying new things.