I Feel Sick

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Apr 3, 2012 21:22
I had been sick since yesterday. I couldn't eat anything all day long and had had a stomachache, a headache and a fever. Even though I had been lying on our bed and took some medicines, it didn't help me. I had felt sick all day long.

Today, I felt better even though I slightly have a fever. Since I didn't want to eat greasy food, I cooked "鶏鍋 （とりなべ-tori nabe)". I watched the food on a cooking show and tried it. My husband doesn't like chicken because he isn't used to eating it. His mother also doesn't like it and haven't cooked it at home. When he bit it at once, he said "It's very tasty!". I'm glad today's dinner was good, and it made everyone happy.
kinshirou
Apr 3, 2012 21:27

体調不調だったんですね。
お体ご自愛なさいませ。
＊美味しそうな鶏鍋です。

Apr 3, 2012 21:29 yumi
ありがとうございます。たぶん、日曜日に主人の母のお見舞いで行った病院先でうつったのではないなかぁと思います。この鶏鍋は、イメージ画像です。ふふふ。
Sushi Smile
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 4, 2012 00:08
  • I had been sick since yesterday.

  • I have been sick since yesterday.

    present perfect tense

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  • I couldn't eat anything all day long and had had a stomachache, a headache and a fever.

  • I couldn't eat anything all day long and have had a stomachache, a headache and a fever.

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  • Even though I had been lying on our bed and took some medicines, it didn't help me.

  • Even though I have been lying on our bed and took some medicines, it didn't help me.

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  • I had felt sick all day long.

  • I had felt sick all day long (yesterday).

    If you are still sick say "I have felt sick all day lond"

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  • Today, I felt better even though I slightly have a fever.

  • Today, I felt better even though I slightly have a slight fever.

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Take care.
By the way, in your 1st sentence you used "since". That indicates that you are still sick. In that case your story should be written in present perfect tense.

Apr 4, 2012 22:04 yumi
Thanks for the correction and the warm comment!
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