Homework

There are is a lot of homework this week, aren't isn't there?

We read a writing piece about the differences between two sisters.

The elder sister, Lottie, likes to work and save money, but she has never enjoyed her life.

The yonger sister, Bess, likes to travel all over the world, and gets married to second-rate horn player.

After his her husband dies, she has to depend on her sister because she doesn't have any money, property, and or house.

The writing piece is written from a the point of view of the elder sister.

So we should try to think about it from the younger sister's point of view.

There's a world of difference between the two sisters, but I can tell that they are vain persons people.

The younger one, Bess, has to depend on her elder sister,

but it's not easy thing for her.

Personally, I have two sisters, but it wouldn't be easily to rely on them at all no matter what happened.

Put it this way - Bess loses her self-respect when she decides to depend on Lottie.

In fact, Lottie envies Bess, on the contrary, even though Bess envies Lottie too as well.

This story tell teaches us that the grass is always greener on the other side of the fence.

We read a passage(?) about the differences between two sisters.

The elder sister, Lottie, likes to work and save money, but she has never enjoyed her life.

The younger sister, Bess, likes to travel all over the world, and is married to a second-rate horn( what type of horn? saying "horn" is a bit unnatural.) player.

After her husband died, she has to depend on her sister because she doesn't have any money, property (possessions?), or a house.

The writing is written from the viewpoint of the elder sister.

So we should try to (consider/think about) it from the younger sister's point of view.

There's a world of difference between the two sisters, but I can tell that they are vain people.

The younger, Bess has to depend on her elder sister, but it's not easy for her.

But it's not easy thing for her.

Personally, I have two sisters, but It wouldn't be easy for me to rely on them at all no matter what happened.

Put it this way, Bess loses her self-respect when she decides to depend on Lottie.

What's more, Lottie is better off than she expected, so she has to pretend not to envy her.

In fact, while Lottie envies Bess, Bess also envies Lottie.

The story illustrates to us the irony of the expression, "the grass is always greener on the other side of the fence."

There are is a lot of homework this week, aren't isn't there?

We read a writing story about the differences between two sisters.

The elder sister, Lottie, likes to work, and save money, but she has never enjoyed her life.

The yonger sister, Bess, likes to travel all over the world, and got married to married a second-rate horn player. (It's not wrong, but it sounds more natural to say it this way)

After his her husband died, she has had to depend on her sister because she doesn't didn't have any money, property, and or house.

The writing story is written from a point of view of the elder sister. from the elder sister's point of view.

So we should try to think about it from the younger sister's point of view.

There's a world of differences between the two sisters, but I can tell that they are vain personspeople.

The yonger, Bess, the younger sister, has to depend on her elder sister.

But it's not an easy thing for her.

Personally, I have two sisters, but it wouldn't be easily easy to rely on them at all no matter what happen. if something happened.

Let's put it this way, Bess loses lost her self-respect when she decided to depend on Lottie.

What's more, Lottie is better off than she expected, so she has to pretend not to envy that she's not envious of Lottie.

In fact, Lottie envys Bess, on the contrary, Bess envys Lottie too. both Lottie and Bess envy each other.

TheThis story tell us that the grass is always greener on the other side of the fence.

There is a lot of homework this week, isn't there?

Sigh... (This isn't a sentence, but because you're talking informally, it doesn't need to be. I would still capitalize the "S" though.)

We read a writing about the differences between two sisters.

The elder sister, Lottie, like to work, and save money, but she has never enjoyed her life.

The younger sister, Bess, likes to travel all over the world, and got married to a second-rate (horn (trumpet?)) player.

After his husband died, she has to depend on her sister because she doesn't have any money, property, or home.

The writing is written from the point of view of the elder sister,

so we should try to think about it from the younger sister's point of view. (Never start a sentence with "so")

There's a world of difference between the two sisters. but I can tell that they are (vain ?) persons.

The younger sister, Bess, has to depend on her elder sister,

but it's not easy thing for her. (Never star a sentence with "but")

Personally, I have two sisters, but It wouldn't be easy to rely on them at all no matter what happens.

To put it this way, Bess lost her self-respect when she decided to depend on Lottie.

In fact, Lottie envys Bess. On the contrary, Bess also envys Lottie too. (Avoid ending a sentence with the word "too." It's better to not end sentences with particles. Instead, use "also" earlier in your sentence.)

The story tells us the grass is always greener on the other side of the fence.

There is a lot of homework this week, isn't there? (Home work is always singular, no matter how much there is.)

We read a story about the differences between two sisters.

The elder sister, Lottie, likes to work, and save money, but she has never enjoyed her life.

The younger sister, Bess, likes to travel all over the world, and got married to a second-rate horn player. (verbs conjugated in the present need an '-s' at the end for third person singular, like 'Bess' or 'Lottie')

After his her husband died dies, she has to depend on her sister because she doesn't have any money, property, and or a house. ('his' is masculine while 'her' is feminine. also the tense should be the same throughout the sentence, and story. 'died' is past tense while 'has' and 'doesn't' are present.)

The writing story is written from a the point of view of the elder sister. (from how you presented this, I assume this is a story, but there are other categories of 'writings.' 'writing' is grammatically correct, but is not used often. the use of the articles 'a' and 'the' can be confusing, but when talking about who is telling a story 'the point of view' is always used. 'older' could also be used where you used 'elder,' but what you have is also fine, just a little more formal.)

So we should try to think about it from the younger sister's point of view.

There's a world of difference between the two sisters, but I can tell that they are vain persons people. ('persons' and 'people' have the same meaning, and they are both the plural form of 'person.' 'people' is used in most cases. 'persons' is used more in official speech and writing- like laws- and can sound awkward in normal conversation.)

But it's not an easy thing for her.

Personally, I have two sisters, but and It it wouldn't be easily easy to rely on them at all, no matter what happened. (I changed 'but' to 'and' because what you said was more of an addition than a contrast. 'easy' is an adjective and 'easily' is an adverb. the sentence could also be: '...and I couldn't easily rely on them...')

To put it this way, Bess loses her self-respect when she decides to depend on Lottie. (I am not sure about the 'To put it this way.' it is still awkward, but I don't know exactly how it would be best. and the verb tenses have to stay the same. I put it in the present because you are mostly using it, but the sentence could also be written: 'Bess lost her self-respect when she decided to depend on Lottie.')

In fact, Lottie also envys envies Bess. On the contrary, Bess envys envies Lottie too. (The wording is awkward, but I don't want to change your meaning. the 'in fact' at the beginning could be left out for stylistic reasons. I split it into two sentences because it naturally reads that way.)