my holiday
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Today is Saturday,and it is holiday in Japan.
I had slept until 12:00pm.
I regretted and then I decided to make the day more effective.
I woke and cook a lunch.
Today's lunch was Chinese fried rice.
After Eating lunch, I prepared myself to go outdoor.
I went playing soccer. I like that very much!!!
Today became good concerning the result!
Thank you for reading, I'm glad for your correcting!
I had slept until 12:00pm.
I regretted and then I decided to make the day more effective.
I woke and cook a lunch.
Today's lunch was Chinese fried rice.
After Eating lunch, I prepared myself to go outdoor.
I went playing soccer. I like that very much!!!
Today became good concerning the result!
Thank you for reading, I'm glad for your correcting!

I woke and cook a lunch.I woke up and cooked lunch
After Eating(having) lunch, I prepared myself to go outdoor(outdoors).
Today is Saturday,and it is a holiday in Japan.
I had slept until 12:00pm.
I regretted this and then I decided to make the day more effective.
I crossed this part out because it is already understood that you're talking about yourself.
I woke and made lunch.
After Eating lunch, I prepared myself to go outdoors.
I went to play soccer.
I like playing soccer very much!!!
Today turned out to be a good day!
Thank you for reading, I appreciate your corrections!