The reason why we have to be diligence

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Mar 8, 2017 10:53
The reason why we have to be diligence

I work until mid-night,
I study hard,
I sleep lately and wake up early.
All for my future.

I believe how much i pay how much reward.
No matter how hard in our lives,
We could overcome and make a better life.

To someone who is fighting for his future.
We are on the same team.
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北斗神拳伝承者
Mar 8, 2017 12:02
  • The reason why we have to be diligence

  • The reason why we have to be diligent.

    "diligent" is an adjective; "diligence" is a noun.

 
  • I work until mid-night,
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  • I study hard,
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  • I sleep lately and wake up early.

  • I go to sleep late and wake up early.

 
  • All for my future.
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  • I believe how much i pay how much reward.

  • I believe the more I pay, the more the reward.

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  • No matter how hard in our lives,

  • No matter how hard in our lives,

 
  • We could overcome and make a better life.
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  • To someone who is fighting for his future.
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  • We are on the same team.
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The reason why we have to be diligence I work until mid-night, I study hard, I sleep lately and wake up early. All for my future. I believe how much i pay how much reward. No matter how hard in our lives, We could overcome and make a better life. To someone who is fighting for his futur


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