My hobby is playing the violin.

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Mar 11, 2017 10:41
My hobby is playing the violin.I started playing the violin when I was five years old.I have not played the violin for about one year becuse I had to study for a college entrance exam.So I have to practice harder.I belonged to an orchestra club at my high school.I took a liking to playing in an orchestra as well as solo.
Beelzebubbles
Mar 12, 2017 07:22
  • My hobby is playing the violin.
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  • I started playing the violin when I was five years old.
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  • I have not played the violin for about one year becuse I had to study for a college entrance exam.
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  • So I have to practice harder.
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  • I belonged to an orchestra club at my high school.
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  • I took a liking to playing in an orchestra as well as solo.
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I tired learning the violin a long time ago, but I was absolutely dreadful. It really made me admire people who can actually play!

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Mar 13, 2017 08:21 kazu
  • Thank you for correcting!I play the violin as just a hobby,so I admire people who play it as a profession.
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