today, i mounted on my mommy's arm.

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Apr 20, 2017 07:28

today, i mounted on my mommy's arm.
I just wanted to show her that I love her but I did it too much!
zzz... I got tired and fell down on the floor and passed out ...
今日はママの手にマウンティングしました。
大好きなことを伝えたかっただけだけど、やり過ぎちゃった！
疲れてたおれたら、気を失っちゃった！
MaJoMoMc
Apr 20, 2017 11:11
  • today, i mounted on my mommy's arm.

  • Today, I mounted myself on my mommy's arm.

 
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  • today, i mounted on my mommy's arm.

  • Today, I mounted myself on my mommy's arm.

 
  • I just wanted to show her that I love her but I did it too much!

  • I just wanted to show her that I love her, but I did it too much overdid it!

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  • zzz...
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • I got tired and fell down on the floor and passed out ...

  • I got tired, and fell down on the floor and passed out ...

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Apr 21, 2017 21:22 nicky
  • MaJoMoMc　さん　、添削してくれてありがとうございます！！　thank you so much !^^お返事遅くなってごめんなさい。
NOR
Apr 20, 2017 15:38
  • today, i mounted on my mommy's arm.

  • Today, I humped on my mommy's arm.

    Based on "マウンティング" but...

    My Japanese is not good enough to tell if there is supposed to be a sexual connotation to "マウンティング". Humping can have that connotation in English.

    "Mounting" is just the act of getting on top of something, not the movement afterwards.

    この添削が失礼ならごめんなさい。 >_<

 
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Apr 21, 2017 21:23 nicky
  • Humpingですね、勉強になりました！mounting!! あああ恥ずかしいです　(/ω＼)
    NORさん添削ありがとうございました！　お返事遅くなってごめんなさい！！m(__)m

 
Apr 23, 2017 18:24 oldgaijin
  • Yes, the word 'humping' has entered the dictionary in recent years as a sexual act. It does however, still retain its original meaning of carrying a heavy load with difficulty.
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