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How do I make times? (どうやって時間をつくるか)

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Sep 22nd 2010 23:36
I try to do a lot of thing.
(私はたくさんしたい事があります。)

For example,to study English not to mention chinese.
(例えば、英語の勉強はもちろん中国語も...)

I should be exercise every day and want to watching TV drama "heroes.
(毎日運動もするべきだし、ドラマ「HEROES」もみたいし、)

I want to read newspaper .
(新聞も読みたい。)

Certainty I must have a dinner and take a bath.
(もちろん、夕食、お風呂にもはいらなくてはいけない。)

I don't have enough time.
(十分な時間がありません。)

I wish one day is 48 hours.
(一日が48時間ならいいのに)

But it is impossible .
(それは不可能な事です。)

So,I have like to do it.
(私はこの様にしています。)

First time I write to do list on noteboo.
( まず、私はやる事をノートに書き)

I do it while I take a train.
(電車に乗っている間にします。)

How is there everyone?
(みなさんはどの様にしていますか？)
Wyn
Thank you for your correction!
Sep 24th 2010 13:34
  • I try to do a lot of thing.

  • I try to do a lot of things.

 
  • For example,to study English not to mention chinese.

  • For example, I try,to study both English and Chinese.***Kenny, it is difficult to correctly use the phrase "not to mention". And i honestly recommend that you don't try to use it. It is not a very useful phrase, and it is considered a very advanced phrase to learn how to use properly.

 
  • I should be exercise every day and want to watching TV drama "heroes.

  • I should be doing exercises every day, but I want to watch the TV drama "heroes" instead..

 
  • I want to read newspaper .

  • I want to read the newspaper .

 
  • Certainty I must have a dinner and take a bath.

  • Certainty I must have a dinner and take a bath.******Certainly I must have dinner and take a bath.

 
  • I don't have enough time.

  • But I don't have enough time to do everything I want to do!

 
  • I wish one day is 48 hours.

  • I wish one day had 48 hours instead of only 24.

 
  • So,I have like to do it.

  • `So,I'd like to learn to be able to do it.

 
  • First time I write to do list on noteboo.

  • First, I write a "to do" list in my notebook.

 
  • I do it while I take a train.

  • I do it while I am taking the train.

 
  • How is there everyone?

  • (I wonder) How does everyone else do it?

 
Good basic outline of explaining the problems you have trying to do all your work in only 24 hours. You are having trouble with syntax and grammar. I understand - English is very difficult because it is so different from Japanese, ne? But if you endure and continue studying and doing exercises you will succeed. Study hard and you will learn!! Good luck!
Wyn
Sep 24th 2010 13:40
  • How do I make times? (どうやって時間をつくるか)

  • How do I schedule my time? (どうやって時間をつくるか)

 
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