Interactions (Part 1) -- Books and Ways

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Dec 6, 2017 22:18 diary
"Improving writing skills can go through a wide range of reading.", both of my teachers, Rob and S made one same comment in their points of view respectively.

Therefore, I am happy as a little bird to enjoy freely reading English books in my interesting fields. Moreover, I am delightful that M has so many spiritual books to lend me in her apartment.

While we shared some experience, she showed me some western astrology for understanding personality. Afterwards, I shared some our Chinese astrology for predicting things. M told me a thing before she came here over 10 years ago, she had a vision about Dao symbol and something which she wasn't aware of the meaning at the moment.

Sacred Contracts, Caroline Myss
https://www.amazon.com/Sacred-Contracts-Awakening-Divine-Potential/dp/0609810111
Soulmate Contract Power Partnership Spiritual Life
https://www.amazon.com/Soulmate-Contract-Power-Partnership-Spiritual/dp/1622030850
要改善寫作可透過廣泛的閱讀，我的二位老師在他們的許多觀點中，不約而同說了一點相同的評論。

因此，我像隻快樂的小鳥，享受閱讀在我有興趣的英文的書。而且我很高興，Ｍ有許多心靈學上的書可以借我在她的公寓。

當我們分享更多經驗，她拿出一些西方的占星術的圖像去了解人的個性。然後，我分享如何預測事情在中國紫微斗數。Ｍ告訴我一件事有關10年前，她有預見一些道的象徵和一些事，那時她並不知那是什麼。
Kate
Dec 7, 2017 09:45
  • "Improving writing skills can go through a wide range of reading.", both of my teachers, Rob and S made one same comment in their points of view respectively.

  • "Improving writing skills can happen through a wide range of reading." Both of my teachers, Rob and S, made this same comment in their respective points of view.

 
  • Therefore, I am happy as a little bird to enjoy freely reading English books in my interesting fields.

  • Therefore, I am happy as a little bird to enjoy freely reading English books in my fields of interest.

    "Happy as a little bird" is grammatically correct, but I don't really hear people use this phrase.

 
  • Moreover, I am delightful that M has so many spiritual books to lend me in her apartment.

  • Moreover, I am delighted that M has so many spiritual books to lend me in her apartment.

 
  • While we shared some experience, she showed me some western astrology for understanding personality.

  • While we shared some experience, she showed me some western astrology literature about understanding personalities.

 
  • Afterwards, I shared some our Chinese astrology for predicting things.

  • Afterwards, I shared some of our Chinese astrology for predicting things.

 
  • M told me a thing before she came here over 10 years ago, she had a vision about Dao symbol and something which she wasn't aware of the meaning at the moment.

  • M told me that before she came here over 10 years ago, she had a vision about the Dao symbol and something of which she wasn't aware of the meaning at the time.

 
Thank you for your correction!

 
Jan 8, 2018 01:20 Salus

  • Therefore, I am happy as a little bird to enjoy freely reading English books in my fields of interest.

    "Happy as a little bird" is grammatically correct, but I don't really hear people use this phrase.

  • Hi Kate,
    Many thanks for your corrections.
    This helps me a lot.
    Hope you have a good week.
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