I caught a cold, so I took a medicine.

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May 21, 2018 14:38
I caught a cold, so I took a medicine. Now, I am very sleepy because of after effect. This is the second time that I catch a cold this year. When I am getting older, it is easier to catch a cold and it is harder to recover. There are three important things to prevend a cold. First of all, sleeping for six hours. Second of all, moderate exercise. At last, healthy diet. I make sure to put them into practice.
tony
May 22, 2018 12:22
  • I caught a cold, so I took a medicine.

  • I caught a cold, so I took a medicine. [Alternative: ... so I took some medicine.]

    "Medicine" is often used as an uncountable noun.

 
  • Now, I am very sleepy because of after effect.

  • Now, I am very sleepy because of a side effect. [More natural: It is making me sleepy.]

 
  • This is the second time that I catch a cold this year.

  • This is the second time (that) I have caught a cold this year.

 
  • When I am getting older, it is easier to catch a cold and it is harder to recover.

  • As I have become older, it has become easier to catch a cold and it is harder to recover.

 
  • There are three important things to prevend a cold.

  • There are three important things to prevent a cold.

 
  • First of all, sleeping for six hours.

  • First of all, sleeping for at least six hours.

 
  • Second of all, moderate exercise.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • At last, healthy diet.

  • At Last, (a) healthy diet.

 
  • I make sure to put them into practice.

  • I (will) make sure to put them into practice.

 
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I caught a cold, so I took a medicine. Now, I am very sleepy because of after effect. This is the second time that I catch a cold this year. When I am getting older, it is easier to catch a cold and it is harder to recover. There are three important things to prevend a cold. First of all, sleeping fo


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