Would you please correct my essay?

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Jan 11, 2017 14:57
Would you please correct my essay? Thank you and best regards.

In my opinion, some automobile companies would not address the development of self-driving cars or driverless cars. I have two reasons to support this opinion.
The first reason is that auto-driving cars have something risks for accidents. When some parts of driving system broke, for example, catastrophic disaster might be happened.
The second reason is that it is difficult to identify the responsibility when self-driving cars and driverless car make an accident. For example, the person who is hit by such car injured or died, it is difficult to decide whether car owner’s fault or car maker’s fault.
For these reasons, I do not believe that auto mobile companies would try to develop self-driving- and driverless- car without establish the law.
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Today, some automobile companies address the development of self-driving cars or driverless cars. Do you think that more automobile companies will start the development of such cars?
●Use two of the POINTS below to support your answer.
●Suggested length: 120-150 words