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The day before yesterday, I sent a message to my sister which live in Oita( Kyusyu) to ask can I come down to see you.
She and I met about two years ago and it had been about seven years we met last.
She said "Yes".
She also said "You can stay here as much as you want".
I really appreciated about it.
I like her very much.
Haveing(To have) a family is nice.
I also think having(to have) a friend is nice too.
Having them makes warm inside me.
I have help my improving by them.
I want to introduce my sister to my friends.
I also want to introduce my friends to my sister.
They will be able to say "hello".
What kind of wonderful thing will happen around us ?
I want to see it someday.
Well, I am looking forward to see my sister.
She and I met about two years ago and it had been about seven years we met last.
She said "Yes".
She also said "You can stay here as much as you want".
I really appreciated about it.
I like her very much.
Haveing(To have) a family is nice.
I also think having(to have) a friend is nice too.
Having them makes warm inside me.
I have help my improving by them.
I want to introduce my sister to my friends.
I also want to introduce my friends to my sister.
They will be able to say "hello".
What kind of wonderful thing will happen around us ?
I want to see it someday.
Well, I am looking forward to see my sister.
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The day before yesterday, I sent a message to my sister which live who lives in Oita( Kyusyu) to ask "can I come down to see you".
She and I met about two years ago and it had been about seven years since we met last.
She also said "You can stay here as much long as you want".
I really appreciated about it.
Haveing Having(To have) a family is nice. - both are ok, having is more natural
Having them makes me feel warm inside me.
I have to help my myself improving improve by because of (for) them.
Not many corrections today, your English is getting better.
Enjoy yourself in Kyushu. Hope you and your sister have a great time.
Mark
Really? I am glad to hear about it. Someday, I will write about all of my friends in here. I mean how much you and them help my English...
I also will be help your studying Japanese when you want. Only when you want.
I will be very happy to see her...
Thank you so much (^^)"
Mamo
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The day before yesterday, I sent a message to my sister which who lives in Oita (Kyusyu) to ask, "Can I come down to see you?" (九州ですか。それから、Kyushuu のローマ字よりいいですか)
She and I met about two years ago, and at that time it had been about seven years we met last since we had met before then.
She also said "You can stay here as much long as you want".
I really appreciated about it.
Haveing(To have) a family is nice. (You were right on the second one. "To have a family is nice," is much better)
I also think having(to have) a friend is nice too. (This time the first is much better. "I also think having a friend is nice too."
Having them makes warm inside me me warm inside.
I have help my tried helping by improving by them. (I am not quite sure what you are saying here. Are you saying that you helped improve them? Or that they helped improve you?)
Then they will be able to say "hello" to one another.
What kind of wonderful thing will happen around us ? (Hmm, this sounds a bit awkward, and the meaning seems in question. While it is grammatically correct, it might be better to rephrase what you're thinking)
Yes, I will have fun. I also will study with your correction later. Sorry, I just don't have enough time for it tonight.
Mamo(^^)
Do I need to use "seeing" because I leanred to use "noun" or "gerund" in my text? Or I can say just "see" in that sentence?
I also am not sure how to different both "To have" and "Having" but I may be able to understand later...
Thank you so much.
Mamo(^^)
And now that I think about it, "having," and "to have," are mostly similar. They can sometimes sound more or less natural depending on the situation in which they are said. As an example, Mark thought that "having" is more natural, and when I first heard it I thought "to have," is more natural. So it can depend.
I really appreciate about your comment and I learned the other way"I look forward to being able to see my sister" and it is more natural I say "I am looking forward to seeing my sister".
Thank you so much(^^)...
Mamo
Well, I am looking forward to seeing my sister. 二人のnativeの方が添削されていないので、自信がなくなりましたが、look forward toの後は、名詞、動名詞が来ると思います。不明な時は彼らに質問してみてください。
こんにちは。そうですね。遅くなってしまったけれど、Eriko-sanのコメントの内容について勉強しました。ありがとうございます！
Mamo