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Feb 05th 2012 20:44
I am a Premium member in Lang-8 now.

Do you think why I did it?

Since before I was thinking about it because if I be premium member, I can read my journal with a PDF file and it is easy to hold in my USB.

So...I got PDF file now. I am happy about it.

I also bought a word book. I will study hard with this word book(単語帳=Tang chou） and this site. I am very serious studing English.

Also I want to share with everybody about my Japanese language. It is nice to help each other and so improve each other....

Let's enjoy learning something new.

I think it makes us fun and high quality of life.
Vermilion
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Feb 05th 2012 21:07
  • I am a Premium member in Lang-8 now.

  • I am a Premium member on Lang-8 now.

 
  • Do you think why I did it?

  • Why do you think I became it?

 
  • Since before I was thinking about it because if I be premium member, I can read my journal with a PDF file and it is easy to hold in my USB.

  • I've been thinking about it since before, because if I become a premium member, I can read my journal on PDF files and it is easy to hold in my USB.

 
  • I got PDF file now.

  • I got PDF files now.

 
  • I am very serious studing English.

  • I am studying English very seriously.

 
  • Also I want to share with everybody about my Japanese language.

  • Also I want to share my Japanese language with everybody.

 
  • It is nice to help each other and so improve each other....

  • It is nice to help each other and improve each other....

 
  • I think it makes us fun and high quality of life.

  • I think it makes us have fun and gives us a high quality of life.

 
Let's enjoy English! As you know, it's my motto!
Feb 05th 2012 21:09 Mamo
Thank you so much, Vermilion!

Yes I know it...

Mamo
Feb 06th 2012 08:32 Mamo
Vermilionさん、一つ教えていただけますか？

最後のsentence、"/and gives us a high quality of life" で　"gives" になっているのは "it" が "gives"の前にあり省略されているから…でOKですか？

Mamo
Feb 06th 2012 08:41 Vermilion
そうです。合ってますよ。
Feb 06th 2012 08:50 Mamo
あってるんですねぇ。あっりがとう！

Mamo
zakk99
Thank you for your correction!
Feb 05th 2012 21:28
  • Do you think why I did it?

  • Do you know why I did it?

 
  • Since before I was thinking about it because if I be premium member, I can read my journal with a PDF file and it is easy to hold in my USB.

  • I was thinking about it, being a premium member, for a long time, because as a premium member I can have my journals in PDF format and also PDF is easy to carry on the USB.

 
  • I will study hard with this word book(単語帳=Tang chou） and this site.

  • I will study hard using this word book(Tang chou) and this website.

 
  • I am very serious studing English.

  • I am very serious about studying English.

 
  • Also I want to share with everybody about my Japanese language.

  • Also, I want to share with everybody my knowledge of the Japanese language.

 
  • It is nice to help each other and so improve each other....

  • It is nice to help each other, and so improve together.

 
  • I think it makes us fun and high quality of life.

  • I think it makes us have fun and enjoy the high quality of life

 
Feb 06th 2012 08:36 Mamo
Hello zakk99.

Thank you so much for your correction.


Mamo
Feb 06th 2012 09:22 zakk99
do ittashimashite! :P
kevlarsen
Thank you for your correction!
Feb 06th 2012 00:49
  • I am a Premium member now. Why ?

  • I am a Premium member now. Why, you ask?

 
  • Do you think why I did it?

  • Why do you think I did it?

 
  • Since before I was thinking about it because if I be premium member, I can read my journal with a PDF file and it is easy to hold in my USB.

  • Since Before I was thinking about it because if I became a premium member, I can could then read my journal with a PDF file and which it is easy to hold in on my USB flash drive.

 
  • I got PDF file now.

  • I got have my PDF file now.

 
  • I also bought a word book.

  • I also bought a word vocabulary book.

 
  • I am very serious studing English.

  • I am very serious about studying English.

 
  • Also I want to share with everybody about my Japanese language.

  • Also I want to share with everybody about my Japanese language as well.

 
  • It is nice to help each other and so improve each other....

  • It is nice to us helping each other. and so improve each other.... Helping each other implies people are improving, it would say the same thing twice. Maybe it'd be better to say "and see each other improve" instead.

 
  • I think it makes us fun and high quality of life.

  • I think it's makes us fun and promotes high quality of life.

 
I'm glad you enjoy learning English.
Feb 06th 2012 16:39 Mamo
Thank you Kevlarsen.

I like you say "And see each other improve". That's true and how nice it is.
So we are promoting our quality life. Let's improving together.

Question:
Do I not need the word of "high" if I say it? That's why you don't use it is that...."quality" means including mean of "high", is my understanding okay ?

Mamo
Feb 07th 2012 02:24 kevlarsen
When you say "promote quality of life" it is understood you are trying to make it as high as possible. Also "make high" is not usual English. You should say 'improve' or 'promote' instead of "make high" or maybe "gives us high quality of life"
Feb 07th 2012 07:04 Mamo
Ah～..
I was impressive by your message.

Thank you for your explain detail.
Mamo
Harpsichord
Thank you for your correction!
Feb 06th 2012 14:30
  • Also I want to share with everybody about my Japanese language.

  • Also I want to share the Japanese language with all of you.

 
  • It is nice to help each other and so improve each other....

  • It is nice to help each other to improve...

 
  • I think it makes us fun and high quality of life.

  • I think that will help us to lead more enjoyable lives.

 
I should take my learning as seriously as you are! If you keep it up you'll improve in no time^^
Feb 06th 2012 16:50 Mamo
Harpsichord,

Thank you for such a nice comment. I hope so...
I also learned nice word "enjoyable lives". I like this word.

Well, that's why you said "lives" and not "life" is....what?I can't find the reason. Could yu tell me more about it?

Mamo
Feb 09th 2012 05:59 Harpsichord
I think you can use either one. Because of the word 'us' (as in 'our lives'), it sounds ok to me to use the plural, but of course the singular is also correct.
Feb 09th 2012 06:23 Mamo
I understand...
Thank you so much, Harepsichord.

Mamo
Julian-K
Thank you for your correction!
Feb 06th 2012 17:18
  • Let's enjoy learning something new.

  • Let's enjoy learning something new. -- This is great; but try also 'Let's enjoy learning new things'

 
Yes, the PDF is very useful. I wish the design was simpler/ easier to use, though.

英語の勉強、頑張って下さい！応援します。
Feb 06th 2012 17:26 Mamo
So you mean you are a little bit uncomfortable to use PDF??

Yes, I will enjoy learning English. "Let's enjoy learning new things♪"

Thank you so much, Julian-K.
Mamo
Feb 06th 2012 17:28 Julian-K
Maybe it's because my journal entries have many, many mistakes, but when I have many corrections I find a lot of them don't fit into the small box and get cut off =(
Feb 07th 2012 18:39 Mamo
Well, mitake make us improve....

Mamo
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