Recording

Oh wow, there is quite a difference from the original! When you end each line with the emphasis going "downward" (and neutral, too) like I was explaining, it makes your pronunciation sound even more natural. Great observational skills and wonderful job, Hideさん！

Not bad at all :P

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I would suggest you get another microphone though... the sound wasn't crystal clear.

Nice job! I knew I'd heard that somewhere before and towards the end I realized that it's a Shel Silverstein poem.

Only a couple of small points:
thimble -- the "th" sound was closer to an "s" sound
fourteen -- I didn't hear the final "n" sound so it sounded like "forty"

I would also suggest getting a new mike, because it was a little staticy. (<-- pronounced like "staticky." It means there was some static.)