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I've found my best friend become more and more wierd since the last spring festival. She is easier to lose her temper than before. Another friend can't bear her anymore and break with her. And I don't want to tolerate,either. It should be very comfortable and happy when frieds are being together. Sometimes, I think she should go to see the psychologist. She will be mad at any tiny thing.I need to be away with her for a while.
comfuse~You mean.. "confused"?
She became/has become short-tempered unlike before. (If you use a comparison, then the reader will think: "She is already short-tempered before and now she has become even more")
Another friend couldn't stand her anymore and broke with her. (You may use Present Simple if you talk about things that happen everyday)
And I don't want to tolerate any longer, either. (Not a mistake. Just make your sentence... easier to understand)
It should be very comfortable and happy when friends are being together. (I wonder what you mean? You wanna say "It was so comfortable...", or "It should be very... if we friends are together"?
She will be mad at any tiny thing. (LoL - ppl will think this is the result of going to the psy 笑). Better write: "...psychologist because she became angry for any tiny thing" or "...psychologist so that she'll stop being mad at any tiny thing like now"
I need to be away from her for a while. (Anyway, this expression is still unnatural. Better write: "I need to keep a distance from her for a while")
Thanks a lot, I learned more!