English essay

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Jul 15, 2019 15:37
English essay
I have to submit english essay to school.
Could you correct a mistake?

Maybe you think that things never work out as you wanted,but most successful people know what is important to improve own life and lead to succeed.Thus,I think we have something we can do to change our future.I will show you some method and what I learned from textbook to succeed.