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Jul 12, 2019 06:40
English essay5

I need to submit this essay to school.
Could you correct a mistake and give me advice?This is last paragraph.

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I mentioned three important things to become a successful person.I think these are not so difficult.It is easy to take action.You should sleep enough everyday and try doing various things then never give up.You can achieve an amazing result only by making these small effort.