English Essay

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Jul 15, 2019 14:50
English Essay
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1) I think that luck is what we gain by ourselves.I have a friend who is good at drawing and she received many awards.I was envious of her ability to draw picture.But actually she makes an effort to find what is suited for her.She had a lot of lesson besides drawing.From her attitude,I thought that nothing to happen unless you take an action.If you challenge to many things,you will eventually get a huge break.
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