English essay

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Jul 15, 2019 14:28
English essay
I retouched some sentences.
Could you correct a mistake?

1)You should continue to trying many time,if you want to accomplish something.In addition,you should not blame others or circumstances.All you have to do is to keep working.

2)If you do not act,nothing gonna change.I think that the only way to go far beyond what you expected is to keep taking small steps forward.No one can succeed without taking action.In other words,You can achieve an amazing result only by doing these three things.