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저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

Which phrase is more appropriate?

Which phrase is more appropriate? They hid behind the door. They hid themselves behind the door.
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Jan 31, 2018 22:58
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

To her surprise, "leave it to me, please" was his first word. With native lang

To her surprise, "leave it to me, please" was his first word.
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Jan 30, 2018 23:32
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

"Is there a way to fix this?" his mother decided to consult an old ... With native lang

"Is there a way to fix this?" his mother decided to consult an old man in the neighborhood.
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Jan 29, 2018 22:40
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

He only keeps saying, "Ok, I will get up." With native lang

He only keeps saying, "Ok, I will get up."
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Jan 28, 2018 23:43
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

Hiroshi is kind of a late riser. With native lang

Hiroshi is kind of a late riser. His mom wakes him up every single morning for school, but seldom does he wake up.
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Jan 27, 2018 22:12
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

A Hat Full of Cherries With native lang

A Hat Full of Cherries This story's author, Hanaoka Daigaku (花岡大学) had made a career in the Army, serving in the 38th Infantry (歩兵第3...
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Jan 26, 2018 13:06
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

For this reason, astronauts wear shoes of a peculiar--specifically, shoes wit... With native lang

For this reason, astronauts wear shoes of a peculiar--specifically, shoes with spikes on the bottom--shape and hook the spike up very tig...
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Jan 25, 2018 09:34
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

In space, you can make yourself float instantly by stamping your feet a little. With native lang

In space, you can make yourself float instantly by stamping your feet a little. Furthermore, once you have a cough, you will probably fin...
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Jan 24, 2018 09:47
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

It's also considered more fun to walk inside a spaceship than to walk upo... With native lang

It's also considered more fun to walk inside a spaceship than to walk upon the earth.
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Jan 23, 2018 21:09
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

Hence, when astronauts consume liquids, they have to use plastic cups with li... With native lang

Hence, when astronauts consume liquids, they have to use plastic cups with lid and straw.
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Jan 22, 2018 21:40
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

It is because the water lost its own weight in space, where are not affected ... With native lang

It is because the water lost its own weight in space, where are not affected by g-forces.
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Jan 21, 2018 22:28
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

Most people usually think that in space, the water won't spill over or le... With native lang

Most people usually think that in space, the water won't spill over or leak even if the cup is completely turned upside down. As you ...
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Jan 20, 2018 23:01
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

The Funny Space Life With native lang

The Funny Space Life Do you know or do you ever have an opportunity to see how the astronauts live in space, especially in spaceships? ...
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Jan 19, 2018 21:01
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

"What about you? With native lang

"What about you? Have you ever tasted this?" the baby monkey asked again, gently but persistently. "No, not at all. I did...
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Jan 18, 2018 23:43
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

A little squirrel told a leveret what he overheard the fox saying about the g... With native lang

A little squirrel told a leveret what he overheard the fox saying about the grapes. The leveret was lost in thought after hearing that: ...
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Jan 17, 2018 22:15
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

The Sour Things and the Sweet Things With native lang

The Sour Things and the Sweet Things There was an astute fox under a grapevine. The fox ran around trying hard to catch a bunch of grap...
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Jan 16, 2018 21:57
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

The waves hit and bounced off the shore and rolled back into a circle. With native lang

The waves hit and bounced off the shore and rolled back into a circle. The mother frog moved herself closer to his son and said, "O...
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Jan 15, 2018 23:39
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A little frog was so struck by the incongruity of the moment that he asked hi... With native lang

A little frog was so struck by the incongruity of the moment that he asked his mom, saying, "Mom, there seems to be another frog lur...
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Jan 14, 2018 22:04
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

The Re-echoing Sound With native lang

The Re-echoing Sound There was a stone bridge over a stream. Beneath the bridge, there was an arched space, that formed a substructure ...
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Jan 13, 2018 22:53
저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

After a couple of days, the marmot's patience became worn out. With native lang

After a couple of days, the marmot's patience became worn out. She wrote on one of her home-made paper ships that, "If you want...
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Jan 12, 2018 20:16