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A Toadstool Bumbershoot With native lang

A Toadstool Bumbershoot The rain was tapped down on the ground, wetting the leaves, branches, and trunk. The two clever small birds fli...
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Sep 30, 2017 23:17
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Burying a Fish Alive on the Soil Surface With native lang

Burying a Fish Alive on the Soil Surface A man of advanced years, who farms 240 square meters of maize around the Bryant Park in New Yor...
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Sep 29, 2017 22:35
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A snow painting was completed simply by only a few footsteps with neither pai... With native lang

A snow painting was completed simply by only a few footsteps with neither paints nor brushes. Then, what kept the frog from participatin...
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Sep 28, 2017 23:37
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A Little Painter on the Snowy Field With native lang

A Little Painter on the Snowy Field Look out, it's snowing in my backyard! The clinging snowflakes to the shrubs almost make it look...
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Sep 27, 2017 18:19
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I guess my question to you all is, should we let the poor overcome as one of ... With native lang

I guess my question to you all is, should we let the poor overcome as one of the possible socialization methods the financial problems on...
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Sep 26, 2017 23:35
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My classmates and I alike were literally struck speechless and dumbfounded wi... With native lang

My classmates and I alike were literally struck speechless and dumbfounded with wonder. Mrs.Lin, the deputy headteacher of our school, m...
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Sep 25, 2017 19:46
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Li Xiaoqing was responsible for certain chores around the school as a class c... With native lang

Li Xiaoqing was responsible for certain chores around the school as a class committee member. A few of days ago, he transferred to anoth...
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Sep 24, 2017 22:27
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Li Sheng inquired of his mom with a serious look on his face: "Can you t... With native lang

Li Sheng inquired of his mom with a serious look on his face: "Can you tell me in more about this tower? Like for example, the origi...
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Sep 23, 2017 22:48
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The Most Unusual and Rarest Tower in the Universe With native lang

The Most Unusual and Rarest Tower in the Universe The star-gazing tower, open throughout the year except about a month vacation, regular...
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Sep 22, 2017 22:37
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Yesterday, I had a dream that it made no sense at all, however, to say that I... With native lang

Yesterday, I had a dream that it made no sense at all, however, to say that I felt like it lasted at least one week. Anyway, in my dream ...
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Sep 21, 2017 23:20
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A Grandfather Who Wore Makeup For The First Time Ever With native lang

A Grandfather Who Wore Makeup For The First Time Ever When the New Year of the Ox has dawned auspiciously, my school held a New Student ...
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Sep 20, 2017 22:33
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The Story About Three Elementary School-age Kids Who Found The Outside Tap Wh... With native lang

The Story About Three Elementary School-age Kids Who Found The Outside Tap Which Was Left Open. There was a water-tap with running water...
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Sep 19, 2017 23:20
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In the early morning sunlight, I pulled back the curtain of the seemingly uno... With native lang

In the early morning sunlight, I pulled back the curtain of the seemingly unopenable window in my mind that was once closed to everything...
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Sep 18, 2017 23:36
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The shafts of sunlight, like glints of gold, were scattered throughout the fi... With native lang

The shafts of sunlight, like glints of gold, were scattered throughout the field, high mountain meadows, and other streams in Western Chi...
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Sep 17, 2017 23:06
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The Hubble Space Telescope, which is named after one of the NASA employees ab... With native lang

The Hubble Space Telescope, which is named after one of the NASA employees about 30 years ago, has been equal to the eyes of the astronom...
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Sep 16, 2017 23:37
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The next morning, after breakfast, the moment Xiao Yun's mom grabbed her ... With native lang

The next morning, after breakfast, the moment Xiao Yun's mom grabbed her bag to go to work, she saw a stunningly beautiful cloth tedd...
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Sep 15, 2017 22:39
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Indeed, if I might, I'd like to gladly lend my birthday to you. With native lang

Indeed, if I might, I'd like to gladly lend my birthday to you. When Xiao Yun woke up that morning thinking that he didn't want ...
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Sep 14, 2017 19:38
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The zoo has many different kinds of animals that you can watch them almost an... With native lang

The zoo has many different kinds of animals that you can watch them almost anytime but not allowed to have as a pet like dashing lions, f...
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Sep 13, 2017 17:58
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Most of our town's people have planted many species of fruit trees, which... With native lang

Most of our town's people have planted many species of fruit trees, which will help us to be able not only to meet the demand of our ...
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Sep 12, 2017 19:51
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My grandfather, who raised me with all the love I could ever want and more, h... With native lang

My grandfather, who raised me with all the love I could ever want and more, has changed a lot since the early 1980s or in the past 36 yea...
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Sep 11, 2017 23:23