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A Toadstool Bumbershoot
With native lang
A Toadstool Bumbershoot
The rain was tapped down on the ground, wetting the leaves, branches, and trunk.
The two clever small birds fli...
A Toadstool Bumbershoot
With native lang
A Toadstool Bumbershoot
The rain was tapped down on the ground, wetting the leaves, branches, and trunk.
The two clever small birds fli...
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저바쁘니까..첨삭ㄴㄴ요.
Burying a Fish Alive on the Soil Surface
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Burying a Fish Alive on the Soil Surface
A man of advanced years, who farms 240 square meters of maize around the Bryant Park in New Yor...
Burying a Fish Alive on the Soil Surface
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Burying a Fish Alive on the Soil Surface
A man of advanced years, who farms 240 square meters of maize around the Bryant Park in New Yor...
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저바쁘니까..첨삭ㄴㄴ요.
A snow painting was completed simply by only a few footsteps with neither pai...
With native lang
A snow painting was completed simply by only a few footsteps with neither paints nor brushes.
Then, what kept the frog from participatin...
A snow painting was completed simply by only a few footsteps with neither pai...
With native lang
A snow painting was completed simply by only a few footsteps with neither paints nor brushes.
Then, what kept the frog from participatin...
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저바쁘니까..첨삭ㄴㄴ요.
A Little Painter on the Snowy Field
With native lang
A Little Painter on the Snowy Field
Look out, it's snowing in my backyard! The clinging snowflakes to the shrubs almost make it look...
A Little Painter on the Snowy Field
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A Little Painter on the Snowy Field
Look out, it's snowing in my backyard! The clinging snowflakes to the shrubs almost make it look...
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저바쁘니까..첨삭ㄴㄴ요.
I guess my question to you all is, should we let the poor overcome as one of ...
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I guess my question to you all is, should we let the poor overcome as one of the possible socialization methods the financial problems on...
I guess my question to you all is, should we let the poor overcome as one of ...
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I guess my question to you all is, should we let the poor overcome as one of the possible socialization methods the financial problems on...
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My classmates and I alike were literally struck speechless and dumbfounded wi...
With native lang
My classmates and I alike were literally struck speechless and dumbfounded with wonder.
Mrs.Lin, the deputy headteacher of our school, m...
My classmates and I alike were literally struck speechless and dumbfounded wi...
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My classmates and I alike were literally struck speechless and dumbfounded with wonder.
Mrs.Lin, the deputy headteacher of our school, m...
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Li Xiaoqing was responsible for certain chores around the school as a class c...
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Li Xiaoqing was responsible for certain chores around the school as a class committee member.
A few of days ago, he transferred to anoth...
Li Xiaoqing was responsible for certain chores around the school as a class c...
With native lang
Li Xiaoqing was responsible for certain chores around the school as a class committee member.
A few of days ago, he transferred to anoth...
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저바쁘니까..첨삭ㄴㄴ요.
Li Sheng inquired of his mom with a serious look on his face: "Can you t...
With native lang
Li Sheng inquired of his mom with a serious look on his face: "Can you tell me in more about this tower? Like for example, the origi...
Li Sheng inquired of his mom with a serious look on his face: "Can you t...
With native lang
Li Sheng inquired of his mom with a serious look on his face: "Can you tell me in more about this tower? Like for example, the origi...
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The Most Unusual and Rarest Tower in the Universe
With native lang
The Most Unusual and Rarest Tower in the Universe
The star-gazing tower, open throughout the year except about a month vacation, regular...
The Most Unusual and Rarest Tower in the Universe
With native lang
The Most Unusual and Rarest Tower in the Universe
The star-gazing tower, open throughout the year except about a month vacation, regular...
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Yesterday, I had a dream that it made no sense at all, however, to say that I...
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Yesterday, I had a dream that it made no sense at all, however, to say that I felt like it lasted at least one week. Anyway, in my dream ...
Yesterday, I had a dream that it made no sense at all, however, to say that I...
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Yesterday, I had a dream that it made no sense at all, however, to say that I felt like it lasted at least one week. Anyway, in my dream ...
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A Grandfather Who Wore Makeup For The First Time Ever
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A Grandfather Who Wore Makeup For The First Time Ever
When the New Year of the Ox has dawned auspiciously, my school held a New Student ...
A Grandfather Who Wore Makeup For The First Time Ever
With native lang
A Grandfather Who Wore Makeup For The First Time Ever
When the New Year of the Ox has dawned auspiciously, my school held a New Student ...
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The Story About Three Elementary School-age Kids Who Found The Outside Tap Wh...
With native lang
The Story About Three Elementary School-age Kids Who Found The Outside Tap Which Was Left Open.
There was a water-tap with running water...
The Story About Three Elementary School-age Kids Who Found The Outside Tap Wh...
With native lang
The Story About Three Elementary School-age Kids Who Found The Outside Tap Which Was Left Open.
There was a water-tap with running water...
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저바쁘니까..첨삭ㄴㄴ요.
In the early morning sunlight, I pulled back the curtain of the seemingly uno...
With native lang
In the early morning sunlight, I pulled back the curtain of the seemingly unopenable window in my mind that was once closed to everything...
In the early morning sunlight, I pulled back the curtain of the seemingly uno...
With native lang
In the early morning sunlight, I pulled back the curtain of the seemingly unopenable window in my mind that was once closed to everything...
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The shafts of sunlight, like glints of gold, were scattered throughout the fi...
With native lang
The shafts of sunlight, like glints of gold, were scattered throughout the field, high mountain meadows, and other streams in Western Chi...
The shafts of sunlight, like glints of gold, were scattered throughout the fi...
With native lang
The shafts of sunlight, like glints of gold, were scattered throughout the field, high mountain meadows, and other streams in Western Chi...
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The Hubble Space Telescope, which is named after one of the NASA employees ab...
With native lang
The Hubble Space Telescope, which is named after one of the NASA employees about 30 years ago, has been equal to the eyes of the astronom...
The Hubble Space Telescope, which is named after one of the NASA employees ab...
With native lang
The Hubble Space Telescope, which is named after one of the NASA employees about 30 years ago, has been equal to the eyes of the astronom...
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The next morning, after breakfast, the moment Xiao Yun's mom grabbed her ...
With native lang
The next morning, after breakfast, the moment Xiao Yun's mom grabbed her bag to go to work, she saw a stunningly beautiful cloth tedd...
The next morning, after breakfast, the moment Xiao Yun's mom grabbed her ...
With native lang
The next morning, after breakfast, the moment Xiao Yun's mom grabbed her bag to go to work, she saw a stunningly beautiful cloth tedd...
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저바쁘니까..첨삭ㄴㄴ요.
Indeed, if I might, I'd like to gladly lend my birthday to you.
With native lang
Indeed, if I might, I'd like to gladly lend my birthday to you.
When Xiao Yun woke up that morning thinking that he didn't want ...
Indeed, if I might, I'd like to gladly lend my birthday to you.
With native lang
Indeed, if I might, I'd like to gladly lend my birthday to you.
When Xiao Yun woke up that morning thinking that he didn't want ...
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저바쁘니까..첨삭ㄴㄴ요.
The zoo has many different kinds of animals that you can watch them almost an...
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The zoo has many different kinds of animals that you can watch them almost anytime but not allowed to have as a pet like dashing lions, f...
The zoo has many different kinds of animals that you can watch them almost an...
With native lang
The zoo has many different kinds of animals that you can watch them almost anytime but not allowed to have as a pet like dashing lions, f...
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저바쁘니까..첨삭ㄴㄴ요.
Most of our town's people have planted many species of fruit trees, which...
With native lang
Most of our town's people have planted many species of fruit trees, which will help us to be able not only to meet the demand of our ...
Most of our town's people have planted many species of fruit trees, which...
With native lang
Most of our town's people have planted many species of fruit trees, which will help us to be able not only to meet the demand of our ...
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My grandfather, who raised me with all the love I could ever want and more, h...
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My grandfather, who raised me with all the love I could ever want and more, has changed a lot since the early 1980s or in the past 36 yea...
My grandfather, who raised me with all the love I could ever want and more, h...
With native lang
My grandfather, who raised me with all the love I could ever want and more, has changed a lot since the early 1980s or in the past 36 yea...
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