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저레알바쁘니까...첨삭ㄴㄴ요.

Everyone in the woodland valley loved promenading and talking on the footpath. With native lang

Everyone in the woodland valley loved promenading and talking on the footpath. At some point, however, the path became dirty with trash ...
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Nov 30, 2017 23:49
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The Beautiful Pathway With native lang

The Beautiful Pathway There was a long footpath in front of uncle duck's small cottage. It was a cobbled way with bright and colorf...
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Nov 29, 2017 23:36
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The Picture of Fall With native lang

The Picture of Fall "Fall is here, fall is here!" The mountains and the fields were really, really, and more really picturesq...
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Nov 28, 2017 23:44
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While leaving the window, the moon thought to herself. With native lang

While leaving the window, the moon thought to herself. "I think I should tell the thunder about this. Maybe he should make it rain ...
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Nov 27, 2017 23:53
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The moon went to another house and tried to peek in through the window. With native lang

The moon went to another house and tried to peek in through the window. There was a good-natured girl who took care of her mom with great...
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Nov 26, 2017 23:46
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A Wish of the Moon With native lang

A Wish of the Moon As the night dragged on, the air around the moon seemed to resonate with the sounds of hundreds of chirping crickets....
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Nov 25, 2017 19:43
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The little snowman managed to pull the baby rabbit from a burning home, but i... With native lang

The little snowman managed to pull the baby rabbit from a burning home, but it itself has melted away. Where has the little snowman gone...
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Nov 24, 2017 22:38
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The baby rabbit got so tired of playing with the snowman that went home and g... With native lang

The baby rabbit got so tired of playing with the snowman that went home and got some rest. As he felt noticeably cold and numb, he threw...
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Nov 23, 2017 22:55
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The Little Snowman With native lang

The Little Snowman It snowed so hard all the day through. There was snow on the roof, snow on the tree, snow on the ground, snow, snow,...
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Nov 22, 2017 23:53
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Now that fall was here, once again they betook themselves to the forest with ... With native lang

Now that fall was here, once again they betook themselves to the forest with pledges to cut down the tree they had their eye. However, t...
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Nov 21, 2017 23:24
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A Little Baby Bear of the Cave Dwellings in the Mountain With native lang

A Little Baby Bear of the Cave Dwellings in the Mountain There lived a bear family in the vicinity of the cave mouth. The papa bear sai...
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Nov 20, 2017 19:46
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The monkey pup went to the watermelon farm, cradling a fistful of peaches. With native lang

The monkey pup went to the watermelon farm, cradling a fistful of peaches. On reaching the farm, he was once again exulted by the prospe...
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Nov 19, 2017 23:52
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It Was A Little Monkey That Came Down The Mountain With native lang

It Was A Little Monkey That Came Down The Mountain On a day in August, a monkey cub went down from the mountain and into the corn patch....
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Nov 18, 2017 22:34
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"I've got it!" The squirrel came up with great ideas. With native lang

"I've got it!" The squirrel came up with great ideas. "Every time I pick pinecones from now on, I'll eat one and ...
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Nov 17, 2017 22:43
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The Flying Squirrel and the Pinecone With native lang

The Flying Squirrel and the Pinecone There lived a smart and active flying squirrel. He learned how to pick and eat the pinecone and has...
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Nov 16, 2017 23:17
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Then a sparrow warbled, "Nope, it's more red than green!" With native lang

Then a sparrow warbled, "Nope, it's more red than green!" "Can't you see? After the spring rain was scattered all...
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Nov 15, 2017 17:42
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The Color of April Showers With native lang

The Color of April Showers "Pit-a-pat, pitter-patter, Trickle, Trickle, " The spring rain were gliding down the ground like a ...
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Nov 14, 2017 16:56
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From that day on, the squirrel cub visited the organic patch almost day after... With native lang

From that day on, the squirrel cub visited the organic patch almost day after day, very often, even several times a day, to see if they&...
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Nov 13, 2017 12:59
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Enjoying the Fall Season as a Little Squirrel is All About Saving Peanuts and... With native lang

Enjoying the Fall Season as a Little Squirrel is All About Saving Peanuts and Chestnuts for Upcoming Winter Season. An organic veggie pa...
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Nov 12, 2017 21:58
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The mother swallow nodded almost solemnly, "Very well!" With native lang

The mother swallow nodded almost solemnly, "Very well!" "What else is different between the two? Go check out them one la...
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Nov 11, 2017 18:43