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Nov 20, 2017 03:20 Kimpress made 12 corrections for The monkey pup went to the ...
Nov 19, 2017 15:03 Blake made 9 corrections for It Was A Little Monkey That...
Good work. I knew those names sounded familiar. Once you mentioned Kenzaburo Oe and Yukio Mishima, I knew you were talking about famou...
Nov 19, 2017 01:47 ragnar made 13 corrections for It Was A Little Monkey That...
Nov 19, 2017 01:29 Kris made 10 corrections for "I've got it!"...
Nov 18, 2017 10:38 Blake made 8 corrections for "I've got it!"...
I cannot add any more to Jon (previous corrector)'s wonderful additions/changes. Keep up the great work! :)
Nov 18, 2017 07:51 Jon made 15 corrections for "I've got it!"...
Hopefully this helps! I'm a little confused as to where the story went after a little while but I did my best to provide accurate cor...
Nov 17, 2017 16:02 Blake made 15 corrections for The Flying Squirrel and the...
Well done! Keep up the top writing.
Nov 17, 2017 01:59 Kay-Kay made 23 corrections for The Flying Squirrel and the...
You have a pretty good understanding of grammar, but you might want to practice vocabulary a bit more and work on making the sentences so...
Nov 17, 2017 01:47 britt made 23 corrections for The Flying Squirrel and the...
Nov 16, 2017 15:06 Blake made 24 corrections for Then a sparrow warbled, &qu...
Excellent writing--there are some particularly well-written and poetic ones here :)
Nov 15, 2017 15:13 Blake made 21 corrections for The Color of April Showers
Well done! You always seem to come up with some interesting sentences.
Nov 15, 2017 11:07 velo35 made 4 corrections for The Color of April Showers
Nov 15, 2017 10:51 Woobl made 5 corrections for The Color of April Showers
Nov 13, 2017 16:40 Blake made 14 corrections for From that day on, the squir...
Great! I just changed the tense a little bit in some sentences. :)
Nov 13, 2017 14:56 ColFrogfoot made 14 corrections for From that day on, the squir...
Since I became interested in Japanese about two years ago, when running, I am always listening to foreign music instead of Korean music w...
Nov 13, 2017 06:43 Edward made 15 corrections for Enjoying the Fall Season as...
Very interesting!
Nov 13, 2017 02:30 Miloplease commented on Enjoying the Fall Season as...
小松鼠找花生≠작은 다람쥐로 가을을 보낸다는 것은 다가올 겨울을 위해 땅콩과 밤을 비축해 두는 것이다. A small squirrel finds peanuts = A squirrel's autumn is spent stockpiling o...
Nov 13, 2017 01:52 Jay made 13 corrections for Enjoying the Fall Season as...
Nov 12, 2017 11:19 Blake made 13 corrections for The mother swallow nodded a...
Wow, French kissing after eating raw garlic? I guess if you are prepared to eat raw garlic then you are prepared to French kiss another p...
Nov 11, 2017 20:54 Yogian made 4 corrections for The mother swallow nodded a...
Nov 10, 2017 17:08 Blake made 14 corrections for The mother swallow said, &q...
Nice job! Very entertaining and well-written sentences.
Nov 10, 2017 14:16 Yogian made 3 corrections for The mother swallow said, &q...
Nov 9, 2017 13:17 Yogian made 4 corrections for Mom, I Feel Like I Become M...
Nov 9, 2017 01:10 XP made 12 corrections for After seeing a shingle arou...
I think you've a strong command of English and you're trying to write an eloquent essay. It's OK, but most of your structures...
Nov 7, 2017 20:43 JoshuaLee made 13 corrections for A Crow Who Is Devising To W...
Nov 7, 2017 02:28 Karin made 3 corrections for The birthplace of Ping Ping...
Nov 7, 2017 01:46 Mewmewkyu made 21 corrections for Jing Jing once belonged by ...
Nov 6, 2017 12:26 sam made 2 corrections for The birthplace of Ping Ping...
Beautifully written!
Nov 5, 2017 06:38 River made 2 corrections for Shan Shan's hometown wa...
Nov 4, 2017 23:40 AnimalRamirez1976 made 15 corrections for Shan Shan's hometown wa...
Good job! Wish I knew the end of the story!
Nov 4, 2017 00:57 stevenenfrançais made 14 corrections for Draw The Cityscape Where I ...
Nov 3, 2017 15:11 CLEAN & CLEAR commented on Seeing grandma awake, Xiao ...
죄송한데 그 기프티콘으로 커피를 살 수 있는지 궁금해요. 직접 들은 기회가 없을 것 같아서...
Nov 3, 2017 14:35 Amy made 7 corrections for Seeing grandma awake, Xiao ...
Nov 2, 2017 12:10 Early_Cuyler made 18 corrections for After they had lunch, grand...
Nov 2, 2017 04:21 sh.lemm made 21 corrections for A Cotton-made Shoe Which Ha...
Nov 1, 2017 04:40 River made 14 corrections for With that being said, we sp...
Oct 31, 2017 22:13 velo35 made 7 corrections for Suddenly, my mom soundlessl...
Oct 31, 2017 11:28 Ren made 6 corrections for When did my grandmother swi...
Oct 31, 2017 11:28 Ren made 15 corrections for When did my grandmother swi...
Oct 31, 2017 03:43 Ben made 15 corrections for Suddenly, my mom soundlessl...
Excellent grammar! Consider using a couple dialogue tags in strategic places (ex. "Regardless, it just feels cute to me," my m...
Oct 29, 2017 21:30 sh.lemm made 15 corrections for Watching the TV as My Famil...
Good job!
Oct 29, 2017 19:31 eyelidface made 15 corrections for Watching the TV as My Famil...
Oct 27, 2017 05:35 1regit made 19 corrections for Xiao Yun continued as if he...
Oct 26, 2017 04:03 Becca made 9 corrections for Ling Ling said with a sulle...
Oct 26, 2017 03:53 Cryptographicide made 18 corrections for Ling Ling said with a sulle...
Are you doing this for a translation class? Are these excerpts from two different stories?
Oct 25, 2017 16:52 RIE commented on The Little Companions
「迷子なの。」「迷子札、もってないの。」 みさは、住所と電話番号を書いた紙をいつもスカートのポケットに入れています。 団地の住所は、とてもおぼえにくいのです。 「おまえはだめねぇ。」 「ポケットないものねぇ。」 みさがあれこれ話をしていた正にその時誰かが呼ぶ声が聞...
Oct 25, 2017 00:51 sam made 2 corrections for The Little Companions
I love the way you tell stories, so poetic and beautifully written. Almost like little snippets of past memories. Keep up the great work!
Oct 24, 2017 21:07 isym444 made 7 corrections for The Little Companions
The grammar is mostly ok but I think the narrative needs some work.
Oct 24, 2017 03:02 Beelzebubbles made 15 corrections for It was only then that Lanla...
Oct 24, 2017 00:24 KawasemiHami commented on It was only then that Lanla...
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