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Nov 29, 2010 18:20
My daughters and I went to a kids park where they play many attractions yesterday.
ちびちゃんたちと子供用のアトラクションが沢山（たくさん）あるキッズパークへ行きました

The kids park had about ten categories of attractions, soft air mats, riding car simulations, an event corner, an food corner, an inside sand place, pretty exchange clothes , a video game corner, a massage chair corner, a little kids corner and so on.
だいたい10種類くらいのカテゴリーがあって、ソフトエアマットコーナー、車乗り体験、イベントコーナーほか、食事、室内の砂場（しつないのすなば）、かわいい服で着替え、ゲーム、マッサージ,
幼児（ようじ）コーナーなどです

We can use these attractions all day long if we will pay $12 per each person.
ひとり１２ドル払えば一日中遊び放題（あそびほうだい）です


I have been busy since I have to complete the report about the financial research in a few days.
今日は先週の仕事が続いていて短いものになりました

See you tomorrow.
また明日
edKiwi
Nov 29, 2010 18:27
  • My daughters and I went to a kids park where they play many attractions yesterday.

  • My daughters and I went to a kids park where they can play on the many attractions, yesterday.

 
  • The kids park had about ten categories of attractions, soft air mats, riding car simulations, an event corner, an food corner, an inside sand place, pretty exchange clothes , a video game corner, a massage chair corner, a little kids corner and so on.

  • The kids park had about ten categories of attractions, soft air mats, riding car simulations, an event corner, a food corner, an inside sand place, pretty exchange clothes , a video game corner, a massage chair corner, a little kids corner and so on. (an is only used before nouns starting with a, e, i, o or u)

 
  • We can use these attractions all day long if we will pay $12 per each person.

  • We can use these attractions all day long if we will pay twelve dollars $12 per each person.

 
  • I have been busy since I have to complete the report about the financial research in a few days.

  • I have been busy since I have to complete the report about the some financial research in a few days. (You should say some instead of the, because your company will do some financial research which is not related to your report. Understand ? )

 

Hello

Very good. Keep learning English

Thank you for your correction!
River
Nov 29, 2010 20:51
  • My daughters and I went to a kids park where they play many attractions yesterday.

  • My daughters and I went to a kids park where they played on the many attractions yesterday.

 
  • The kids park had about ten categories of attractions, soft air mats, riding car simulations, an event corner, an food corner, an inside sand place, pretty exchange clothes , a video game corner, a massage chair corner, a little kids corner and so on.

  • The kids park had about ten categories of attractions: soft air mats, riding car simulations, an event corner, a food corner, an inside sand place, a booth to exchange pretty clothes , a video game corner, a massage chair corner, a little kids corner and so on.

 
  • We can use these attractions all day long if we will pay $12 per each person.

  • We can use these attractions all day long if we will pay $12 per each person.

 

Wow, there's a lot of kids there!

Thank you for your correction!
shuichi
Nov 29, 2010 22:33

Thank you Edw and ying

I am now at office for completion of our team-report.

I have understood what you said to me except some. So Edw, please tell me next Saturday.

Thank you for your every corrections for me. Have a nice day!!

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