Is this enough for Christmas?
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Ah, today is in the middle of three consecutive holidays in this season. As might be expected I woke up late today, hehe. However I will write about today's entry.
My oldest daughter and I rode our bikes to a certain shop yesterday. My wife and my youngest were on the other event that afternoon.
First we wondered where we should go for a moment. However we shortly agreed to go to the shop, where a nice cheese cake would sell.
The other day, three weeks ago, My daughters and I went strolling and then they found the taste of the cheese cake was wonderful. Who knows? Someone who read my entries might remember the story.
We aimed for the cake shop. On the way I found she got used to riding her bike better than before.
Around Kawaramachi area where a lot of people always go by we easily found the cake shop. We got the cake. I am looking forward to trying this one later. :)
Ah, is this cake enough for Christmas?, don't you? I think it would be nice although a typical cake for Christmas would be more decorated. :)
My oldest daughter and I rode our bikes to a certain shop yesterday. My wife and my youngest were on the other event that afternoon.
First we wondered where we should go for a moment. However we shortly agreed to go to the shop, where a nice cheese cake would sell.
The other day, three weeks ago, My daughters and I went strolling and then they found the taste of the cheese cake was wonderful. Who knows? Someone who read my entries might remember the story.
We aimed for the cake shop. On the way I found she got used to riding her bike better than before.
Around Kawaramachi area where a lot of people always go by we easily found the cake shop. We got the cake. I am looking forward to trying this one later. :)
Ah, is this cake enough for Christmas?, don't you? I think it would be nice although a typical cake for Christmas would be more decorated. :)
As might have been expected, I woke up late today, hehe.
However, I will write about a previous entry.
My wife and my youngest daughter/son were on the other event that afternoon.
First, we wondered where we should go for a moment.
However, we shortly agreed to go to the shop, where a nice cheese cakes were sold.
The other day, Three weeks ago, while my daughters and I went strolling, and then they found the taste of the cheese cake was to be wonderful.
On the way, I found she got used to riding her bike better than before.
Around the Kawaramachi area, where a lot of people always go by, we easily found the cake shop.
Ah, is this cake enough for Christmas, do you think?
I think it would be nice, although a typical cake for Christmas would be more decorated.
My grandma cooked too much food! However, she didn't cook as much as last year. Last year, she cooked way too much, and a lot of the food she cooked was wasted. :(
Have a merry Christmas, Shuichi!
I have eaten some pieces of the cheese cake just now.
Merry Christmas!
Thank you for your corrections too.
Yes, I like apple pie. :D
Merry Christmas!
My wife and my youngest were taking part in another event that afternoon.
However, we shortly agreed to go to the shop, where nice cheese cakes were being sold.
The other day, Three weeks ago, my daughters and I went to this shop during a stroll. They found the taste of the cheese cake to be wonderful.
On the way, I found that she had gotten used to riding her bike better than before.("had gotten" expresses that she got better over time. "got" sounds like it all happened at once)
Ah, is this cake enough for Christmas? What do you think? (or: "Ah... do you think this cake is enough for Christmas?")
Merry Christmas, Shuichiさん！！
I'm sorry! I should have explained this. In the original sentence you wrote, it felt more natural to use "to be wonderful." However, you could keep "was wonderful" if you worded it like this:
"Three weeks ago, my daughters and I went to this shop during a stroll. They found *that* the taste of the cheese cake was wonderful." ← this is the change I should have made, because all you have to do is add "that" to make it more natural. But I saw ApplePie's correction and liked the ring of it ^^
I understand what was problem. Thank you so much.
I think if your family likes something then it is good enough. Christmas is about being with your family,so if they like cheesecake don't worry if it isn't the traditional cake everyone else is eating. you can make your family tradition.