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I went across the Kyoto Imperial palace when I saw a toddler practice his bike ride with his dad.(His mom was also beside them.) To tell the truth the toddler's practice ride was the second time which I saw that day.
京都御所を通ると、小さい子供がお父さんと自転車の練習をしてました（おかあさんも傍にいました）実は、小さいこの自転車の練習を見るのはその日２回目でした
Then I saw some family play at a park inside the Palace. When cherry blossoms bloom many family gather to enjoy the blooming view and to let their children play.
それから、御所内の公園に何人か家族づれがいました。桜の咲く頃、沢山の家族連れが花見や子供をそこで遊ばせるためにあつまります。
That day I saw about five couple of family ride and I saw them let their children play on the ground or in some equipment to play with.
その日は、５組位の自転車の家族連れがいました、そして、子供たちを運動場や遊具で遊ばせていました
Beside the park, a large ginkgo tree was there. Its yellow leaves have already fallen and only one tenth of leaves remained. Errr, winter is here.
公園のそばに、大銀杏がありました。黄色い葉はほとんど散ってしまい、もう１０分の１ほどしか残っていませんでした。う～ん、もう冬です。
京都御所を通ると、小さい子供がお父さんと自転車の練習をしてました（おかあさんも傍にいました）実は、小さいこの自転車の練習を見るのはその日２回目でした
Then I saw some family play at a park inside the Palace. When cherry blossoms bloom many family gather to enjoy the blooming view and to let their children play.
それから、御所内の公園に何人か家族づれがいました。桜の咲く頃、沢山の家族連れが花見や子供をそこで遊ばせるためにあつまります。
That day I saw about five couple of family ride and I saw them let their children play on the ground or in some equipment to play with.
その日は、５組位の自転車の家族連れがいました、そして、子供たちを運動場や遊具で遊ばせていました
Beside the park, a large ginkgo tree was there. Its yellow leaves have already fallen and only one tenth of leaves remained. Errr, winter is here.
公園のそばに、大銀杏がありました。黄色い葉はほとんど散ってしまい、もう１０分の１ほどしか残っていませんでした。う～ん、もう冬です。
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As I was passing by the Kyoto Imperial Palace, when I saw a toddler learning how to ride his bike ride with his dad.(His mom was also beside them.) Actually, this was the second time I saw a toddler learning how to ride a bike that day.
Then I saw some families playing at a park inside the Palace.
When cherry blossoms bloom many families gather to enjoy the blooming view and to let their children play.
That day I saw about five couple of families riding and I saw them let their children play on the ground or in some with some equipment to play with.
Its yellow leaves have already fallen and only one tenth of leaves remained. (you don't need to say "leaves" again since you already said it at the beginning of the sentence, but if you did then you should write it as "of its leaves" or "of the leaves" for it to be grammatically correct)
I guess you could say "toddler's practice ride" but "a toddler learning how to ride a bike" sounds natural to me. You could also say, "I saw a toddler practicing how to ride a bike."
I went across the Kyoto Imperial palace when I saw a toddler practicing riding his bike with his dad.(His mom was also beside them.) To tell the truth the toddler's practice ride was the second one I saw that day. (or -- To tell the truth that was the second toddler practicing riding a bike I saw that day.)
Beside the park there was a large ginkgo tree was there.
There is so much open space there, so it seems like a perfect place to learn how to ride a bike ^^
second one , the second toddler's practice なんだね
ありがとう
Riding through Kyoto Imperial palace, I saw a toddler practising his bike riding with his dad.(His mom was also beside them.) Actually, he was the second toddler I saw practising his bike that day.
At cherry blossom time, many families get together to enjoy looking at the flowers and to let their children have a play.
That day I saw about five couples taking their kids on a ride and then afterwards letting them play on the oval or on some play equipment. (Note: "play equipment" = 遊具)
Only a tenth of its leaves remained as most of its yellow leaves had already fallen.
Yep, winter is here.
Anyhow, it is a shame but I have little time to recall your corrections, I would like to confirm...
今日で二度目です is literally translated as "second time", but it seems not good, in such case, should we say "second toddler whom I saw" or second toddler's practice" ? Thank you.
"this was the second time I saw a toddler learning how to ride a bike that day"
But I think that simpler is often better and so I offered my own version,
"he was the second toddler I saw practising his bike riding that day".
"Actually, he was the second toddler I saw practising his bike riding that day."
I got your intention!
I saw him practicing his bike riding, that seem to be words-full.:)
Thank you!