Where were we ? :)　　　

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Sep 23, 2011 06:28
I will try to upload this entry both on this entry and on my bicycle blog today.
今日はこの日記、ここと、ぼくの自転車ブログ両方に載せたいと思います。

Here is the link to my bicycle blog http://mamabicycle.blogspot.com/
ここにブログのリンクがあります


【Title】
Where were we? ( ← This title is too short but all words are somewhat similar so I will use them)
僕らはど～こだ　（←ちょっと短すぎますが、３文字ともどことなく似てるのでこれにします）


【Pictures and captions】

Let's get started.
さあ出発

Urm, where are we going?
えっと、どこいくの

There are very few cars, right?
きょうは車がすくないね～

Ah, I am watching a car running toward us.
あ、車がくるね～

Eh, I can find a building which I seem to go before.
あ、まえに行ったことあるとこが見えるよ

I got it. This is YMCA, where my older daughter is coming.
わかった、YMCAや　おねえちゃん来てるとこや

There are many bicycles which others also are parking to come here.
ここに来るのに他の人もいっぱい停めてるね

Good job Ma-chan. Are you able to swim well today. Yes. Ah, tasty, this hot chocolate.
おつかれさんマーちゃん　ちゃんと泳げた　うん　あーおいしいこのココア

Takiras
Thank you for your correction!
Sep 23, 2011 07:50
  • I will try to upload this entry both on this entry and on my bicycle blog today.

  • I will try to upload this entry both here (on this journal) and on my bicycle blog today.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • ( ← This title is too short but all words are somewhat similar so I will use them)

  • ( ← This title is too short but all of the words are somewhat similar so I will use them)

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • Ah, I am watching a car running toward us.

  • Ah, I am watching a car coming toward us.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • Eh, I can find a building which I seem to go before.

  • Eh, I can see a building which I seem to have gone to before.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • This is YMCA, where my older daughter is coming.

  • This is the YMCA, that my older daughter comes to.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • Are you able to swim well today.

  • Were you able to swim well today?

 

Sep 23, 2011 10:22 Mayan

  • Eh, I can see a building which I seem to have gone to before.

Or~ "Eh, I can see a building which I seem to have passed up once before." (This sentence would indicate you are lost.)

Sep 23, 2011 11:26 shuichi
Thank you Takiras for your many corrections, that I appreciate.

Mayyan you too. Great thanks.
Thank you for your correction!
Sep 23, 2011 07:53
  • Ah, I am watching a car running toward us.

  • Ah, I am watching a car quickly coming toward us.

 
  • Eh, I can find a building which I seem to go before.

  • Ah, I can see a building which I have gone to before.

 
  • This is YMCA, where my older daughter is coming.

  • This is the YMCA, where my older daughter is coming.

 
  • There are many bicycles which others also are parking to come here.

  • There are many bicycles which other people have also parked to come here.

 
  • Are you able to swim well today.

  • Were you able to swim well today?

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • Ah, tasty, this hot chocolate.

  • Ah, tasty, this hot chocolate. / Ah, this hot chocolate is tasty! ←　more natural

1 people think this correction is good.  

Very cute! ^^

Sep 23, 2011 11:28 shuichi
Thank you for stopping by this entry and your corrections.

I like to ride my bike with my daughters. :)
Tsugumi
Sep 23, 2011 08:06

楽しい～！

Sep 23, 2011 11:28 shuichi
そりゃよかった：）
Sushi Smile
Sep 23, 2011 14:57
  • Eh, I can find a building which I seem to go before.

  • Oh, I can find a building which I seem to have been to before.

 
  • This is YMCA, where my older daughter is coming.

  • This is the YMCA, where my older daughter goes to.

 

Have a nice weekend with your family.

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