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I have managed to go home now. It is 22:00 o'clock. I have just returned home after dinner outside.
いま家に帰ることができました。２２時です。夕食を外で済ませ帰ったばかりです。
This morning, I left home with my daughters to a destination where a playground is located 10 kilometers away from our home. It was 11::00 o'clock. In fact, my eldest daughter and I have rode our Mama Bicycle to the playground once before. Um, I will write about the short story in the future.
今朝、娘たちと家から１0km離れたところにある遊び場に向かうべく家を出ました。11時くらいでした。実際、上のことはかつて一度その遊び場までまま自転車で行きました。えっと、後日またそのショートストーリーをかきたいです。
After playing at the playground we decided to head for another destination which is located in over 15 kilometers. Ah, I will write about the short story later too.
遊び場で遊んでから、15ｋｍ離れたところにある別の目的地に向かうこととしました。えっと、そのこともまたあとで書きたいと思います。
Finally, I had to pedal for the dinner dining restaurant after we enjoyed a special thing at the second destination. I furthermore rode our Mama bicycle 5 kilometers, haha, I may introduce the short story next week.
最後、本日２つめの目的地で特別なことで楽しんだ後、夕食のレストランにむかって自転車をこぐことになりました。ははは、それで５ｋｍまたまま自転車にのることとなりました。 来週その話も書くかもしれません。
As a result, I have totally pedaled my mama bicycle with my daughters for 30 kilometers a day. It was the first time that I have ridden my mama bicycle such a long distance a day. Thank you.
結果、１日でトータル30ｋｍ娘を連れて、まま自転車をこぎました。1日でそんな長い距離をまま自転車に乗ったのは初めてでした。ではでは。
いま家に帰ることができました。２２時です。夕食を外で済ませ帰ったばかりです。
This morning, I left home with my daughters to a destination where a playground is located 10 kilometers away from our home. It was 11::00 o'clock. In fact, my eldest daughter and I have rode our Mama Bicycle to the playground once before. Um, I will write about the short story in the future.
今朝、娘たちと家から１0km離れたところにある遊び場に向かうべく家を出ました。11時くらいでした。実際、上のことはかつて一度その遊び場までまま自転車で行きました。えっと、後日またそのショートストーリーをかきたいです。
After playing at the playground we decided to head for another destination which is located in over 15 kilometers. Ah, I will write about the short story later too.
遊び場で遊んでから、15ｋｍ離れたところにある別の目的地に向かうこととしました。えっと、そのこともまたあとで書きたいと思います。
Finally, I had to pedal for the dinner dining restaurant after we enjoyed a special thing at the second destination. I furthermore rode our Mama bicycle 5 kilometers, haha, I may introduce the short story next week.
最後、本日２つめの目的地で特別なことで楽しんだ後、夕食のレストランにむかって自転車をこぐことになりました。ははは、それで５ｋｍまたまま自転車にのることとなりました。 来週その話も書くかもしれません。
As a result, I have totally pedaled my mama bicycle with my daughters for 30 kilometers a day. It was the first time that I have ridden my mama bicycle such a long distance a day. Thank you.
結果、１日でトータル30ｋｍ娘を連れて、まま自転車をこぎました。1日でそんな長い距離をまま自転車に乗ったのは初めてでした。ではでは。
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The longest family ride of my life 【 30 Kilometer Mama Bicycle ride 】
I just now managed to come home.
It is 2200 o'clock. or: It is 10 o'clock.
I have just returned home after dining out.
This morning, I left home with my daughters to a destination where a playground is located 10 kilometers away from our home. (from our home is understood)
It was 11 o'clock.
In fact, my eldest daughter and I have been there once before.
Um, I will write about that short story in the future.
After playing at the playground we decided to head for another destination which is located in over 15 kilometers away.
Ah, I will write about that short story later too.
Finally, I had to pedal to the restaurant after we enjoyed a special thing at the second destination.
I furthermore rode our Mama bicycle 5 kilometers. Haha, I may write about that next week.
As a result, I have totally pedaled my mama bicycle with my daughters for a total of 30 kilometers today.
It was the first time that I have ridden my mama bicycle such a long distance. ("in one day" is understood)
I have just now managed to come home.("just" is good to include here, because it emphasizes that it was a short while ago that you came home. If you use "now," it sounds like you mean "Nowadays [recent days/weeks/months], I'm able to come home" [as opposed to months or years ago])
I have just returned home after dining out/eating out.(In this case,"outside" literally sounds like "in the outdoors/in nature.")
This morning, I left home with my daughters and went to a destination where a playground is located 10 kilometers away from our home.(using "destination" makes this sentence slightly wordy, but it's still correct ^^ I highly suggest 梨's correction)
It was 11:00 o'clock.(11:00 is already read as "eleven o'clock." I suggest either 11 o'clock or 11:00 ^^ 11:00 is probably more common)
In fact, my eldest daughter and I have rode our Mama Bicycle to the playground once before. (this is good in my opinion ^^)
Um, I will write about the short story in the future.("Um" makes you sound very unsure and timid. Maybe you should only use it if you really, really feel shy and nervous about something while writing ^^)
After playing at the playground we decided to head for another destination which is located in over 15 kilometers away.
Ah, I will write about the short story later too.("Ah" is somewhat unusual to see in written English, unless you're really surprised or excited about something. In English, it's used pretty differently from how it's used in the Japanese language, I've noticed. You could say "Oh yeah, I'll be writing about that story later, too." I don't suggest using "Oh yeah" too often, though. Just every once in awhile ^^)
I furthermore rode our Mama bicycle 5 kilometers, haha, I may introduce this short episode next week.("short story" almost always means "短編小説” or something like that. I think "episode" may work a bit better ^^)
As a result, I have totally pedaled my mama bicycle with my daughters for a total of 30 kilometers in one day.("totally" is rarely used with its original meaning anymore. It's sort of become a slang word for "utterly" or "absolutely." I often hear young American people say it while chatting with their friends // "a day" sounds like "each day.")
It was the first time that I have ridden my mama bicycle for such a long distance in a day.
Wow, you sure are keeping busy and getting lots of exercise!
Wonderfully written entry!
日本人の「今（now)」は、just のイメージなんです。なので、nowの使い方は実はとても？と思います。おそらく、now = recently なのでしょうね。
I have a image that 今 is equal to "just". So I always wander when I should use "now". As you say, "now" similarly means "recently".
About outside I haven't noticed it meant "outdoor". なるほど！ なので、 after dining out
o'clock is learnt when I was a junior high school. I remembered it, however 11:00 seem common and easy.
Oh, "um" has such a nuance. I seem to hesitate to write the next story. I'd not use it so often.^^ そうでしたか！ 曖昧な思いでなければ要りませんね！
Eh! Ahもですね！ こっちはtoo exaggerated ですか！
Ah, "totally" is used as other meanings like "absolutely", right?
実に、たくさんありがとうございました。結論、文頭にはあまりなにも付けなくていいようですね＾＾
I just now made it home.
It is 10 o'clock pm.
This morning, I left home with my daughters for a playground that is 10 kilometers away from our home.
In fact, my eldest daughter and I have ridden our Mama Bicycle to the playground once before.
Um, I will write about that in the future.
After playing at the playground we decided to head for another destination which is located in over 15 kilometers away.
Ah, I will write about that later too.
I then rode our Mama bicycle another 5 kilometers, haha, I may introduce that next week.
As a result, in total I pedaled my mama bicycle with my daughters for 30 kilometers today.
It was the first time that I have ridden my mama bicycle such a long distance in a day.
お疲れ様でした！
Sounds like you did all sorts of things! I can't wait to hear about them (^_^)
さすがに、ちょっと疲れました なので、昨日から風邪気味なのかな
風邪引きたくないな～ 風邪きをつけてね